Choreography Competition I entered..

[Primrodo]

Hey Guys!

Just thought that you would be interested in seeing the lightsaber fight we did for the TFN competition.

Please be kind and right click and save as

2manshows.com/uploads/public/lcc3/06.mov (Offical entry)

or the better music mix:

das-entertainment.com/Eclipse480_2c.mov


The official thread with the other 26 entries is here.

boards.theforce.net/Fan_Films/b10015/17988719/?47


Let me know what you all think We have a full version that will be done in the coming months, and all critique will be taken in and listened to

-Justin

[Ani-Chay Pinn]

Well, it's a little slow on my dialup, but it came through OK. Don't know about looking at the other 25 --that could be time consuming.

It sort of looks like that guy picked up some major bad vibes from the red lightsaber and had to duel it out. Good sound and music (I looked at the better music mix version), but visually, It's a little dark, which hurts when you're trying to follow the action. It looks out of focus in the middle, but that could just the be lower resolution -- my phone line certainly couldn't take more. The problem with it being so dark is that all the bare trees make a very busy background, which makes it a little hard to follow. You might consider lighter color tabbards for the first guy, to make him stand out more. The same with the clutter on the ground -- if you clear a patch, the lightsaber parts would stand out more when they fall.

Very nice outfits BTW. The whole thing looks llike a lot of work. Thanks for sharing.

[JediKai]

Wow. The point at which he's holding at bay the red saber and suddenly opens his eyes....gave me chills!


Very nicely done.

[Primrodo]

Heh thats me BTW Apparently the first take was the best but we weren't filming it, lol! Thanks though I am glad you got the chills, it had its desired effect!

The major plot that we used was that the Jedi after succumbing to teh Dark Side feels totally lost, and doesn't want to live, so he tries to kill himself in any means he can, like trying to run into the masters saber, or tempt the master to fight him and thus to kill him. However the duel is all happening within his mind and thus the outside shot with just me falling and getting up.

[Jedimom/Cor-Al Gelkar]

Oooo.. I love fan films. The last winner "Ryan vs. Dorkman" was fantastic! As soona s your loads, I'll check it out.

Also love "Art of the Saber"

[Jedimom/Cor-Al Gelkar]

Good show! Definitely the one with the audio/music. That just sent chills down my spine! Thumbs up!