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Post by Starkindler (The Naked Jedi) on May 26, 2006 21:48:57 GMT -5
I believe I posted these elsewhere on the message boards, but they probably belong here... ...Comments and feedback are welcome in this thread! ++++++++++ the OT:
Upon a planet dry and dreary lived a hermit old and cheery waiting for the time to come when sabers once again would hum
for this old knight he knew too well the power of the Dark Side's spell and so he waited patiently 'til Vader's Son came seeking he
Then once more began the fight between the darkness and the light though this time out would all depend upon a father's heart to bend
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Before the end things must begin And so it was when one named Jinn Came upon a vergence who Would It was said the Force renew
Though full of fear and Council’s dread The padawan’s braid upon his head Held promise and a power to spare If only learn could he not to care
For compassion narrowed so To selfishness was bound to go In fear and greed the Dark Side hid ‘til ready for the frightened kid
Then by choice the deed was done And darkness befell the Chosen One The temple in flames; the Jedi betrayed As “order 66” command was made
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hope you like them..........??
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 27, 2006 0:57:00 GMT -5
those.....are......frekin.....AWESOME
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Post by Cara Drume on Jul 26, 2006 23:06:38 GMT -5
Ooh...nicey-nice!
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Post by Aston Jor-Cello on Jul 28, 2006 16:23:27 GMT -5
Very good, Tenric, very good.
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Post by acalsohei on Sept 5, 2007 18:26:54 GMT -5
Wow, SW and Poe! Seriously excellent!
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