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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 10, 2006 18:00:33 GMT -5
btw guys, just as a warning, the point of view will change in chapter one to first person with the main character. the prolouge was basically a history behind the story to get you filled in a bit. just thought i would let you guys understand so you dont rip apart my rewriting too badly.
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 12, 2006 2:02:23 GMT -5
Chapter I
I awoke in a cold sweat, the sounds of blasts exploding around me. I dreamt of the Jedi civil war, and awoke as i saw Darth Revan get blasted to oblivion, or what seemed to be. That mattered not though, it seems i had awoken in my undergarments during a battle it seemed. Wait, i was more observant than this, how could i have slept through part of a battle?
The hatchway to my shared quarters opened and a soldier walked in, apparently he was my roommate seeing as how he knew the entrance code.
"good, your awake, i was sent here to get you ready and out of this ship, we have been borded" the man said.
"wait, who are you?" i asked him.
"i am Trask Ulgo, your roommate, although we had different shifts so we never saw each other. but that isnt important, we need to get out of here, so get dressed." he said urgently
"well if you will excuse me then, i have to..." i trailed off, staring at him.
"this really isnt the time, but ok, ill wait for you outside." and he left the room.
So i ran over to my locker, punched in my code, and opened it up. inside were my weapons and my clothing, which i donned as fast as i could, though it took a minute to put on my shirt. I placed my blaster on my hip, and put my vibroblade on the other.
After i was good and ready, i opened the door and stepped out to see Trask waiting there for me.
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on May 12, 2006 2:32:31 GMT -5
nice..more
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 13, 2006 1:39:24 GMT -5
I met Trask out in the hall, he was tapping his foot slightly impatiently, but perked up as i stepped out.
"Ah, good, we need to go, our ship is boarded, so we have to make it to the pods to escape. Since we will be working together though, what is your name?" he asked.
i had a little trouble recalling, the recent dream had me unsettled, so did the recent attack on the ship i was in. "call me Corde," i answered.
"nice to meet you Corde, but we have to get out of here." he said, and we both started walking towards the excape pods.
We made it along for a couple of minutes, when we heard some blaster shots ahead, so Trask pulled out his carbine and turned the safety off. I personally activated my personal shield, maybe good for one or two hits, and drew my vibroblade.
"draw your blaster, you cant do much with that sword" Trask said loudly.
"i feel more comfortable and able with this blade than any clumsy blaster." i growled back.
"gods, you sound like a Jedi"
"well im not..." as i finished this scentence though, a couple of sith soldiers came around the corner and opened fire. Trask returned fire, and i ran into the fray, vibroblade held before me.
When i reached the sith soldiers, my first cut decapitated the first of the five soldiers, and two next to me drew their own blades, as the other two fired at Trask. I deflected the first blade, disarmed the second sith soldier and slid my blade through the armpits of one of the sith firing the blasters. This sith fell to the floor without even a scream, and the second ranged soldier was taken down by a shot from Trask's carbine.
During this little foray, the sith i had disarmed had retrieved his weapon, and now i was stuck fighting two close ranged fighters. The both charged me at once, and i proceeded to parry one handed both of their attacks, and drew my hip pistol and shot one in the face, immediatly killing the poor soul. The last soldier growled and charged me, but a shot from Trask hit him in the chest and he crumpled to a heap on the floor.
Running up to me Trask said, "your pretty good with that, are you sure you arent a jedi, i have never seen a soldier fight like that."
"i assure you Trask that i am no jedi, i just have been a soldier for the republic for years, i should know how to fight by now. your a pretty good shot yourself though, after my rash maneuver, i wasnt sure i could have taken that last fighter, thanks for taking him out."
"i guess we work pretty well together, we should be fine making it to the escape pods."
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on May 13, 2006 18:01:50 GMT -5
cool
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 15, 2006 11:15:21 GMT -5
Darth Malak, sith lord, looked down at the endar spire, the ship he was chasing to finally catch the dreaded jedi knight Bastilla Shan. He was approached by his ships commander Admiral Saul Karath, who asked, "my lord, they are resisting our attacks, shall we send in the sith."
"yes admiral, lets end this, i want Bastilla in my hands before the day is out" Malak said to his Admiral.
"yes my lord, we shall have her soon" he replied back.
Once he brought Bastilla over to the Dark Side, there would be no stopping his armada. He needed her battle meditation to ensure what had happened to his former master did nor repeat itself on him.
While his men all rifled out of his ship onto the Endar Spire, he mused over the coming destruction of the republic. He also reveled in the fact that he could soon destroy the jedi, and the sith would rule the Galaxy.
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 17, 2006 2:38:16 GMT -5
Trask and I continued to make our way through the ship in the direction of the escape pods, taking down various soldiers as we went along. It wasnt hard, these sith soldiers were so poorly trained that it was like killing a herd of animals. we spoke with each other and got to know each other as we went through the ship, him telling stories of his family back home, myself telling him the little that i could remember of my past.
"so you really can not remember much can you?" Trask asked me
"no, i keep trying but it is all one big blur, its there, on the tip of my tounge so to speak. i just cannot reach it, cannot remember.....its a little frustrating." i answered
"i can imagine..." trask trailed off as the next door opened to see a man in black robes before them, with a crimson lightsabre ignited. "run Corde, make it to the pods, ill hold the sith here" and he drew his vibroblade, closed the door behind him and engaged the sith.
"trask, you cant take him by yourself." i yelled and tried to open the door, but it was locked, and i lacked the code and the computer skills to unlock it. I yelled and hit the door, i was just begining to have fun fighting beside Trask. now he sacrificed his life for me, and now i wanted to avenge him, for he had become almost a friend.
As i was irritatedly banging on the door, i got a transmition over my comlink, it said, 'to anyone left in the endar spire, i am Carth Onasi, the only one of the command of the ship left. if you are still aboard with me, come to these coordinates and we will escape this ship.' and the com ended there.
"is this a trap, it seems like it. i cannot just pass this up, trap or not i have to get off this ship" i said as i loaded up the coordinates into my map, and made my way over to the escape pods.
When i approached the door, i saw the face of a bearded man appear on the screen. This was apparently the Carth that had spoken out earlier, and he said over the screen, "i am in one of the pods now, i will let you through, it seems you are the last of the crew that haden't escaped"
"what about the jedi Bastilla?" i asked.
"she has made it to the planet, but i know not what happened to her there, but get in, we must get off this ship." and so he opened the door, i jumped in the pod, and he launched it toward the nearby planet of Taris.
Laser fire came at us but we soon made it into the atmosphere of Taris, and landed in the middle of part of the giant city that was the entire planet. it was in this way that Taris was similar to Corrisaunt.
Carth and I crawled out of the wreckage of the pod, and just as i got out i passed out upon the ground....
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Post by tailonkae on May 17, 2006 21:36:21 GMT -5
That was awesome....
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 18, 2006 0:03:30 GMT -5
you like it guys, im tryin my best. ill put up more later though
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 19, 2006 13:03:33 GMT -5
hey guys, if you ever notice any change in point of view of the story, please let me know, i am known to slip here and there and i dont want to cause confusion.
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Post by Jaren Valnor on Jun 8, 2006 20:21:01 GMT -5
Sweet...when you're done this, you should go on to KotOR2 which is the best video game I've ever played.
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jun 8, 2006 23:07:11 GMT -5
you going to have more for us soon?
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jun 11, 2006 22:53:22 GMT -5
MORE!!!!! *begs*
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on Jul 1, 2006 15:05:22 GMT -5
i liked kotor 1 better myself but still kotor 2 rocks.
sorry about not having more up i have two big issues right now, im only at my apartment on saturdays and i also have a bit of memory and creative block on this right now, sorry
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