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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 5, 2006 15:59:14 GMT -5
so i got bored and decided to start a story for you all to read. its a little twist off of the game Knights of the old Republic, same story, just a little bit of an author's twist going on. i want to make it very detailed, and i liked that storyline.
so im going to get this started
PROLOUGE
Darth Revan looked over the giant expance of space, standing at the observation platform of the mighty Star Forge. Created by the ancient Rakata, the Star Forge was a monolith of ancient technology, a giant monument to the dark side floating in space. It stood there in all its grandeur a massive station with three enormous controll fins, drawing on the nearby star for the matter to create an endless navy for the Dark Lord of the Sith.
Thus Darth Revan looked down upon the navy that the Star Forge had so lovingly created, constantly growing, billowing out from the ancient space station. Many different ships were created for the upcoming attack the dreaded sith lord inteded to make. Indictor class capital ships were the all time favorites of the sith's apprentice, Darth Malak.
Revan now looked down upon Malak's ship, captained by Admiral Saul Karath, a traitor to the republic, and one of the most usefull men to the sith's great cause of galactic conquest. This ship, once a republic capital ship, was then defected by the Admiral over to Revan's navy, and the design base for all of the navy's capital ships. A guard approched Revan in his silver armor, just a mere human, blind to the intricacies of the force.
"My lord Revan?", the lowly guard bowed to the sith master, "Lord Malak requests to speak with you."
"Send him up." Revan retorted tartly.
A minute later, the door to the lift hissed open to admit Revans apprentice, who approched his master, trying to show humility, despite his hatred of his master.
"Master?", he said questioningly to Revan.
"Yes, what do you want?", Revan asked sternly.
"I have just recieved reports of a large rebel fleet forming up in the outer rim to attack the academy on korriban.", he told his master.
"I am aware Malak, and as soon as my flagship is complete, we shall stamp out this minor inconveinience."
"I think we should take caution my master, this doesn't feel quite right", Malak implored his master.
"I am glad you are mindfull of the future of out Empire, but i do not forsee any problems with this attack. We will commence this battle as i have planned it, The Monolith is almost complete, and we will stamp out this rediculous rebellion. Go and wait for its compleation on the Leviathan, and tell Admiral Karath to prepare the navy for departure." Revan ordered.
"Yes master." Malak said as he left the platform and headed to the lift to depart for his ship.
Before Malak entered the lift, Revan told him "This galaxy will be ours, i will unify it, or die trying" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 6, 2006 4:14:12 GMT -5
Padawan Bastila shan awaited in the harbinger as they awaited the immenent attack of Darth Revan. Meditating in her chambers, she was ready to use her battle meditation to help defeat the navy of the imfamous sith lord. She told herself constantly that she was ready for this, but she was a bit nervous, the entire republic fleet putting all its hope on a padawan with a newly discovered ability.
Her master entered the room and sat down cross legged next to her. He sensed his padawan's unreast, and said, "fear not my young padawan, be carefull of your emotions. have confidence, you are a very talented young woman. We will trap the Dark lord, and defeat the dreaded sith and be done."
"But master, you are putting so much on just me, i dont know if i can do it" Bastilla said
"fear is the path to the dark side my young padawan. search your feelings and you will know you can do it. you can do anything you put your mind to Bastilla, i know you can."
"thank you master, I will do my best"
"I know bastilla, that is why i chose you as my padawan, i see much potential in you. i think once this ordeal is over, i think it is time for you to take the trials. i see you becoming a great jedi knight, maybe even a master one day."
"i will do my best"
"that is all i ask my young padawan, that is all i ask." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 6, 2006 5:41:41 GMT -5
Darth Revan stood at the head of the bridge of his newly constructed Monlolith, a new flag ship for the mighty navy of the grand sith lord. The navy was ready and the Dark lord hailed the Leviathan to speak to Darth Malak.
"yes my master" replied Darth Malak
"have you the coordinates of the republic attack force?"
"yes master, i have"
"good, upload them to me and let us bring the armada to destroy this pathetic republic fleet."
"yes my master, the fleet is ready"
Revan waited as the Monolith recieved the coordinates of the republic attack force. As the ship recieved the new information, Revan meditated and felt along the massive being that was the force. The dark lord felt each and every strand connecting to each other, the very being that was the force. As Revan felt across the universe, the dark lord knew the location of the decrepit republic fleet, knew exactly the force and the ships that the Monolith would be up against.
Revan reveled in this feeling, impatiant at the imminent destruction of the republic armada. The dark lord forsaw their destruction, and the unification of the galaxy was soon to be. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 7, 2006 2:37:42 GMT -5
Darth Revan's fleet came out of hyperspace just outside of the firing range of the republic fleet's capital ships, and the republic navy looked on in awe at the massive power that was Darth Revans great flagship the Monolith. Built on the same design of the Interdictor class capital ships, only ten times the size, and it and the dark lord's armada quickly came towards them and unleashed a volley of suppressing fire upon the republic fleet.
"RETURN FIRE" commanded the republic Admiral, as the republic fleet released fire upon the dreaded sith armada.
Bastilla had just entered the bridge of the Harbinger, the flagship of the republic, as the mighty fleet unleashed its weapons to counter the sith firepower. She stood next to the republic Admiral as he issued commands, the dreaded sith armada now meshed within the republic fleet, green and red lasers flaring from both fleets across the visual screen of the Harbinger.
"Bastilla, are you ready to begin your battle meditation?"
"yes Admiral, at your command I shall start." she said to the officer.
"lets get this battle over with and put an end to the sith lord Revan." he commanded.
"yes Admiral." she complied and sat down in a meditative stance, ready to unleash her coveted power for the use of the republic. As she meditated she projected the best possible strategic moves towards the admiral who in turn issued the orders that would earn his fleet victory. Each fighter then would fly at their best, and the gunmen becoming the best they possibly could. Every second Bastilla was in her Battle meditation her allies benefited, whilst her enemies lost morale bit by bit.
After an agonizing half hour of battle two of the Sith Interdictor class capital ships were destroyed by the suppressive fire of the republic capital ships. With the destruction of these two capital ships, it was evident by the focus of the sith fleet that the dark lord was not happy with the turn of events.
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 7, 2006 12:48:17 GMT -5
"HOW HAVE WE LOST TO CAPITAL SHIPS, HOW", Darth Revan angrilly yelled at the Monolith's captain.
"I dont know lord Revan, our troops seem to not have any moral, they dont seem to have the heart, and the republic is fighting us so perfectly" the captain replied.
"loss of moral.......it cant be, that ability hasn't been used in....." Darth Revan felt through the force, and saw the mighty power of Bastilla's battle meditation. The sith lord saw now why the sith troops were doing so poorly. The sith master could see the massive strands of the force emminating from the republic flagship the Harbinger.
"MY LORD ARE YOU OK?" the captain yelled, breaking the dark lord from a trance.
"im just fine captain, but im afraid your going to have to have that neck of yours looked at", Revan said as the captain felt his neck snap, and the life leave him. "YOU," pointing at the second in command, "you are my new flagship captain, now get to work, and concentrate all fire on the republic flagship"
"yes lord!" the new captain saluted, and ordered all ships to fire on the Harbinger
The massive Monolith that was Revans flagship moved parallell to the Harbinger and opened up all fire, the massive capital ship dwarfing all around. the firepower of the giant ship reaking havoc upon the Harbinger's shields. Revan growled as another capital ship was destroyed, but knew the tide of this battle would soon change in the sith's favor.
"i will not let some measly jedi and her stupid tricks to destroy my fleet, i will end the republic and its corrupt senate." Revan mused, "the galaxy will be mine" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 8, 2006 3:03:55 GMT -5
Bastilla's concentration was broken as a barrage of laser blasts hit the shields of the Harbinger, as the ship rocked from the massive power from the sith flagship's weapons. The Harbinger fired back in defence of itself, and there was a vast ammount of confusion as fighters on both sides were destroyed in the crossfire.
"bastilla, what is going on, why have you stoped using your battle meditation, the sith fleet is gaining its advantage back" the admiral inquired
"i that i could, this noise and quaking has shattered my concentration, i cannot meditate on this." she said back
"then we are truly doomed." the admiral sighed "i dont think that we can take on Revan's armada without you, is there nothing you can do."
"nothing short of confronting Revan on that capital ship" said Bastilla's master said as he walked up next to her, "if she cannot meditate than the ability wont work. Admiral, get together twenty of your finest troops on the Harbinger, i will grab eight of my jedi, we shall take on this problem at the source."
Everyone on the Republic Harbinger scrambled to change posts and gather the finest twenty troops, pulling together a crack team to attack the monstrousity of the sith flagship. While all of the republic troops were gathering in the Harbinger's fighter bay, Bastilla and her master gathered together eight jedi from the various parts of combat out in space. They all gathered in the hangar bay, and readied their fighters for launch.
The republic soldiers all boarded their two man fighters, and the jedi jumped onto their specially outfited dart class jedi starfighters. Bastilla's master ordered the launch, and out of the Harbinger they came in the large group of their landing force. Into space the fighters flew, into the chaos of the battle they went, engaging the sith fighters as they went, but not focusing too long on the measly enemies.
As the republic attack force neared the Monolith, they could see the giant letters emblazoned on the rear of the monstrosity of sith technology. a large force of fighters spewed from the side of the sith flagship, engaging the republic forces in full, forcing the jedi and soldiers to take evasive maneuvars. the republic strike force opened fire, letting lose a volley of missiles at the closing sith fighters, taking out a fair share of the weak, yet agile craft. the sith, lacking missiles going more for speed and agility, closed the distance fast and opened fire on the republic fighters, taking out a jedi starfighter and two republic pilots aswell.
The republic pilots meneuvered around the Monolith's engines and came around to fire on the sith fighters, taking out the last few of them. the force, having lost a couple, quickly landed in the rear hangar bay closest to the bridge of Revans monstrosity. They all disembarked their craft and all seven remaining jedi ignited their lightsabres, creating a multitude of colors ranging from blue to orange.
"lets go and finish this, jedi in front, soldiers in the back" Bastilla's master ordered the troops.
"YES SIR!" they all confirmed at once his orders. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 9, 2006 14:07:11 GMT -5
Revan was watching out the rear of the Monolith's bridge as the republic force entered in through the rear hangars. Inwardly the sith lord growled, but felt the presence of the battle meditation weilding jedi, so perked up.
"so they want to take care of me in person, well lets see how well this force will fare against my army. CAPTAIN..." Revan yelled.
"yes master Revan." the captain squeeked.
"you have probably noticed the republic ships entering in our hangar bay...." Revan noted the captain nodding, "to which i suggest you send troops at them before the reach the bridge"
The captain saluted Revan and went off to issue the orders. Revan proceded to watch the battle unfold about the massive flagship.
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"BASTILLA, WATCH OUT!" Bastilla's master yelled as she barely deflected a blaster bolt from the oncoming sith troops. "it seems Revan wants to play around with us a little bit"
The republic troops opened fire on the sith, taking out the first row of enemies, as the jedi deflected the sith bolts tha came in return. This created a hedgehog effect as the jedi were in front creating the defensive line agains the sith. This defence created an almost perfect strategy until the other sith group came from behind and they had to turn the republic soldiers around to fire.
"you men fight these, we will take out the first group" Bastilla's master commanded, and the jedi broke off and charged the sith, losing one of the jedi in the run. blaster bolts were deflected into the sith line, and then the jedi hit them, cutting the group to pieces.
"i sense more coming master" Bastilla commented.
"i do aswell, we need to commandeer an elevator to get up to the ships bridge, that is where Revan is located."
The jedi ran up to the nearest cluster of elevators as the republic soldiers became the rearguard. they split up into to elevators, Bastilla's master and three jedi in one, and Bastilla herself with the two remaining jedi in the next. they heard the blaring of blaster fire near them as the doors closed and the elevators.
Bastilla's elevator reached the bridge and the elevator doors opened to see the dreaded sith lord standing at the back of the ship, overseeing the destruction the sith navy was creating. the three jedi exited the elevator and Bastilla looked around to see where her master was.
"I assure you my young jedi that the second elevator will not be coming up very soon. your other jedi friends are quite busy with my troops." the dark lord said from the rear of the bridge.
The three jedi ran up to the dark lord, and ignited their sabres in an attack stance.
"Revan, you shall pay for your treason against the republic" Bastilla growled.
Revan turned around, masked face hiding the lack of emotion on the sith's face. "my dear jedi, do you really thing two of you and a padawan can take me down." Revan ignited the blood red sabre that was symbolic of the siths current order, "i have already ensured that your soldiers were destroyed, and the other jedi that were with you are soon to join them. i do believe that this attack will continue to rule in my favor....you have no chance against me."
Revan then flew towards the jedi, blood red sabre forward, and the sith lord landed next to them in a flurry of cuts from the dreaded sith blade. The jedi tried to surround Revan, but the sith would just jump out of reach and concentrate the fight on Bastilla, the weilder of the battle meditation.
The battle commenced all over the bridge, Revan moving entirely too fast for the jedi. the crew of the Monolith watched in awe of Revans abilities, feeling very good about being on the sith lords side. ~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on May 9, 2006 16:44:15 GMT -5
oooooooooooooooooo.. MORE!!!!
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 9, 2006 16:55:29 GMT -5
ill put more up later tonight after work, its almost time for me to go, but i intend to have the prolouge finished tonight. Then the meat and potatoes of the tale begins.........dun dun dun.......oooooooooo, the anticipation.....lol, im kidding
to think all this is just the prolouge, be prepared for the actual story
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 10, 2006 1:37:57 GMT -5
Darth Malak looked out of the bridge of his ship the Leviathan, watching as his master's ship took on the republic harbinger. He snarled as he thought about his servitude to whom he thought was a weak willed fool. If it werent for Revans hold on the sith troops, he could easilly be master and dark lord of the sith.
"lord Malak, shall we engage the republic flagship with lord Revan?" Admiral Saul Karath said to the sith apprentice.
"yes Admiral, lets end this pathetic battle" he replied as an afterthough as he continued musing over his hatred of his master.
The Leviathan positioned itself behind the Monolith and proceeded to open fire upon the republic Harbinger. As he watched the battle, he looked up to his masters ship, and in the back area of the bridge he could see lightsabres flailing around. apparently the jedi made it into his masters bridge and now his master was caught in a fight.
He watched the duel from the distance between the two ships for minutes, and as revan made it to the back and stopped, facing the jedi, Malak got an idea.
"Admiral, fire at the Monolith's bridge"
"but lord Malak, he is your master, and our commander..."
Malak interupted him, " this is the way of the sith, and you are directly under my command. i give you two choices, you can fire at Revans bridge, or i can kill you and i can fire on revan's bridge."
Admiral Karath took the only logical choice and gave the order, and though confused, the soldiers did as their admiral ordered, ever loyal. The Leviathan began to fire all its starbord weapons on the one point where Revan was fighting the jedi. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on May 10, 2006 1:56:11 GMT -5
OOOOOOO.. Just like the game... I like this!!!
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 10, 2006 2:55:49 GMT -5
yeah, that was the idea, i loved the game i just wanted to write it, and put my own twist on it. it is by far my fav star wars game
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 10, 2006 3:46:35 GMT -5
Revan continued to fly about the bridge, blocking and parrying each attack by the jedi, fighting like a madman. The jedi could barely hold the dark lord off, Revan was that good with a sabre, but Bastilla noticed that Revan was tiring out. Revan made way to the rear of the bridge and stoped the fight.
"Revan, we have you beat, you cannot keep this up much longer." Bastilla said, "come back to the light side and work with the republic, please do not stay in the darkness"
"The senate of the republic is corrupt my young jedi, i cannot work for such a horrible beurocracy. my galaxy when i am through with it will be harmonious and without all of the corruption. what i am doing is for the good of the republic." Revan growled in return
As this conversation commenced, Malak's attack struck the bridge of the Monolith, sending all of the jedi and Darth Revan sprawling. Revan got up and growled a curse at Malak, the words "Treacherous dog" escaping from the dark lord's lips. The second volley caused parts of the bridge to blast appart, and revan was hit by a massive bolt of electricity, and so was one of the jedi companions with Bastilla.
Bastilla checked her fallen companion, and found he was alright, just unconcious, so she went to check on Revan. Revan was breathing, but Bastilla sensed a disturbance in the force. none the less, she needed to get information out of Revan.
"lets get these two back to the Harbinger, this ship is about to collapse." Bastilla ordered.
Bastilla and her jedi companion dragged the two back to their ships and made off back to the harbinger just as the Monolith imploded upon itself, being broken into hundreds of pieces. They entered the Harbinger and Bastilla ordered that they retreat all Republic forces.
The Republic navy turned and retreated into Hyperspace to escape back to Corricaunt, leaving the sith forces behind them.
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Post by Ldi-Ovef Te_Azi on May 10, 2006 3:46:52 GMT -5
and thus ends the prolouge
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on May 10, 2006 3:58:38 GMT -5
WOOOOOT!!! NICE!!!
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