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Post by Starkindler (The Naked Jedi) on Jul 19, 2006 19:28:00 GMT -5
yes scatter them and have them meet back at the fiery jade..... as for the explosion....it came from outside the enclave correct Steverus? As for the refugees...if you want to start evacuating some of them Himiko..go ahead.... they were inside the enclave in the landing bay as I recall. the fight had just ended and the Firey Jade is nearby. Makirto and Noriko still need to recover or be helped from behind the crates. Ryn is still out cold in the Firey Jade's med-bay....or is she? The Clone troopers Vious left behind at Tatooine might be arriving about now too... Vious' R2 unit might still be working or salvageable. I had thought of a subterranian escapr tunnel for the refugees and only mention it since they may be dealt with before my turn.
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Post by Steverus Zac on Jul 19, 2006 19:38:13 GMT -5
yes scatter them and have them meet back at the fiery jade..... as for the explosion....it came from outside the enclave correct Steverus? Yes outside. Several things could be done with it: it could be from the Fiery Jade, it could be a pursuing vessel straffing, or an orbital bombardment beginning...whatever your imagination desires.
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 20, 2006 10:38:23 GMT -5
Vious' R2 unit might still be working or salvageable.
"Vious’s R2 was on a mission, to delete the existence of the Jedi ever being here and wiping out the computer main frame. Just before he could hook up to the computer, the R2 was lifted in the air and was thrown into the wall and shut down...going completely offline."
possibly salvagable...might...with ALOT of work...still work lol.
Ryn is still in med bay...not for too long though...
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Post by Jedimom/Cor-Al Gelkar on Jul 21, 2006 14:31:38 GMT -5
**** Please remember that this is section is for FICTION only, not role-playing. TJA has a sanctioned role-playing board ( jauhzmynn.proboards46.com/index.cgi?board=Beginning ) if you want to move this segment to that board.
Let this story evolve as a story, not a scenario where things have to get done at a certain point.
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 21, 2006 16:19:19 GMT -5
Jedimom... the authors ask about certain things so they can continue the storyline along and not repeat anything the other authors have done....
we are not making this into a roleplaying story....as this story has different authors...we contribute ideas and such to the other authors and let them write it in their part as they want...if they use the ideas that is fine... but as I said when we comment back and forth..we are just getting ideas and some feedback from the previous authors....we are not roleplaying...this has not been a roleplaying story....it is a fan fiction made up of some of the TJA's members and each are contributing a part to the story in rotation
when we do things like this..... they were inside the enclave in the landing bay as I recall.
the fight had just ended and the Firey Jade is nearby.
Makirto and Noriko still need to recover or be helped from behind the crates.
Ryn is still out cold in the Firey Jade's med-bay....or is she?
The Clone troopers Vious left behind at Tatooine might be arriving about now too...
Vious' R2 unit might still be working or salvageable....... this is just a brief summary for what has happened so far...so the next writer can get an idea of where to go in the storyline...
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jul 21, 2006 16:47:20 GMT -5
I can't think of anything guys... Im also not on the mood right now.
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 25, 2006 8:20:57 GMT -5
ok Jaryk...you are up
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jul 31, 2006 0:13:57 GMT -5
I don' tknow if he knows...
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Post by Steverus Zac on Aug 3, 2006 22:13:16 GMT -5
I have not heard from Jaryk. Perhaps he is in a hostile enviro and must monitor comm-silence. If no one else wants to go I can write another snippet this weekend.
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Post by tailonkae on Aug 4, 2006 11:55:11 GMT -5
sounds good to me.....yea radio silence is essential when you are in a rancor cave..... lol
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Post by Steverus Zac on Aug 8, 2006 0:18:53 GMT -5
Here you are. Scene switch...
Clone commander 5052, known to his troopers as Bly, peered into the glow of the LZ hologram with interest. The first over-flight of two escort ARC-170’s had just blasted several designated ground targets on the descent from the orbit of Dantooine.
The LAAT/i pilot’s voice came over Bly’s in-helmet receiver, “Commander, no defensive fire in the LZ. Crammer and Shadowman report several groups of humanoids in and around the ruins.”
“Good thing,” returned Bly, “I need some excitement. Take us down next to the vessel ner vod, let’s get us some traitors.”
“Yes, sir!” came the immediate reply. His troopers were good and he was proud of them. Bly raised the command channel and gave instructions to the rest of bravo flight to land in a circle around the suspect vessel. All checked back affirmative. Glancing over to the tactical display to his left he saw the distance to the LZ at two clicks and shrinking fast. His flight of six LAAT/i’s, affectionately called “lartys” by the troops, were all he needed on this mission; secure a suspect vessel, confirm its real transponder code to be Fiery Jade, and apprehend all persons on or near the vessel. Simple.
Bly stood up and moved towards the troop compartment, ducking in the tight quarters of the gunship. Standing and holding onto acceleration straps were the two squads of clone troopers.
“Mando’ade, you know the drill, I want all wets in or around the suspect vessel apprehended for questioning.” One trooper gestured with his DC-15, “Commander, if they don’t want to be, shall we say cooperative, can we slot ’em?”
A ripple of laughter played through the group making Bly smile behind his faceplate, “Anything down there that’s not a meat can and makes trouble can be slotted and blotted.” A chorus of whoops erupted from the troopers. It had been too long since they had anything like a real fire-fight. This really wasn’t something Bly expected to keep them in fighting form, but when orders came down from the top no questions were asked.
In the moments before a drop everyone on a larty was quiet. Over time in the GAR it had just became tradition not to speak, otherwise you brought bad luck. In those moments of silence each clone pondered his most private thoughts. This time, Bly’s thoughts returned to the jungles of Felucia. Despite his best attempts at forgetting what had happened there, whenever he had a quiet moment the memories returned, always unbidden and always unrelenting. The blue face turning towards him, the shattered look of betrayal, the blackened body writhing on the ground as bolt after bolt seared and singed her flesh. Beneath the cool white of his helmet, Bly’s eyes closed in anguish, “Aayla.”
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Post by tailonkae on Aug 8, 2006 8:53:21 GMT -5
very nice steverus...way cool..
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Aug 8, 2006 14:14:46 GMT -5
sorry guys.. Ive been so busy here that i havent been thinkin on this.. but that was way cool man..
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Post by Starkindler (The Naked Jedi) on Aug 14, 2006 21:43:30 GMT -5
OK. This is a bit short and maybe heavy handed, but I only had a short time this evening to toss it off......Tailon you're up bud!
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…“Now what!” blurted Kae as they all turned toward the entryway.
“Clones.” Said Tenric as he rose to his feet with a distant look in his eyes. “They’re here for the Fiery Jade…and us.”
“We need to get Makirto and Noriko aboard the ship fast.” Kaelyn said.
They flew into action. As Hett and Kae ran to recover the stunned pair Vos made for the doorway to the lower levels.
“I’ll see to the refugees.” He called over his shoulder. “I know of another exit from the lower levels and can get them out!”
“I’ll get the ship ready!” called Kaelyn as he ran off toward the Fiery Jade. He was surprised to see the ramp descend and the engines powering up. “Ryn!” he called looking up at the c0ckpit, “Perfect timing!” He was greeted with a wan smile and wave from the newly recovered Master. He threw himself aboard and immediately headed for the gun turrets, knowing they’d have to fight their way out.
Storage crates flew aside as Hett and Kae used the Force to clear a path to Makirto and Noriko. They were just coming around and beginning to sit up when the two Jedi reached them. In moments they were running for the ship, Makirto cursing loudly enough to be heard over the din.
Tenric stood where he was for a few heartbeats. He looked down at the fallen Tanzan and the dead Twi’lek traitor. The currents in the Force were moving around their bodies and he sensed the beginning of a plan. “Never the easy way, huh” he sighed under his breath as he bent down and took the billowing black cape that had been Tanzan’s, as Vious. Then he picked up the red bladed saber. He wasn’t sure if he could pull off such a large-scale illusion or not with so many onlookers, but he had to try. He could tell the others would need more time to be ready. Perhaps he could buy them that time. He ran toward the ruined entryway pulling the black cloak over his robes as he ran. Just before he reached the opening he ignited the crimson blade. Using the Force he summoned an image of Vious’ Mask over his features. As he stepped into the open to confront the clones outside he summoned his ‘Big Lie’ and the Fiery Jade vanished into nothingness as the illusion of an empty hangar rose behind him. Empty except for the two bodies, ruined mech droid, and battle damage. He saw the currents in the Force shifting colors and position as he looked out at the six craft landing in the clearing. Chaos reigned in his thoughts as he strove to find the center of calm that would allow him to pull this off. He was guessing this to be the task force the others had eluded on Tatooine and hoping they would accept the authority of Vious. If they did, even for a short time, they might all still get away.
Glancing over his shoulder as he ran up the ramp into the Fiery Jade, Kae saw Tenric head for the opening and guessed at his plan.
“Tenric! No!” was all he got out before their momentum carried him into the ship. He turned to dash out again but was stopped by Hett.
“I have stood in mock battle against Starkindler” He told Kae. “He will prevail.”
“But there are too many for just one!” he objected
“Tenric’s ally is the Force and his Master was one of the greatest Jedi I have ever known. He will prevail.”
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Post by tailonkae on Aug 21, 2006 17:41:39 GMT -5
Iwill post the new chapter before the end of the week....
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