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Post by jedi12 on Jun 23, 2006 11:59:51 GMT -5
you never let us down Tai-lon you are after all the master
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Post by tailonkae on Jun 23, 2006 16:48:56 GMT -5
i was being honest tenric..... lol
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jun 23, 2006 17:02:24 GMT -5
;D I thought Jedi were supposed to be honest Tailon.... ;D We need to get some more done....my kids are waiting to hear what happens.....been reading it to them at bedtime and they love it. That's so cool that your kids love it!
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Post by tailonkae on Jun 24, 2006 15:10:42 GMT -5
......Ok Jaryk...your up............
Ch. 6
Force Unification
As the five Jedi approached Vious, a stir in the Force was so strong that the five Jedi all sensed it and looked directly ahead. Their adversary was poised to strike, but would fail in the vast light that would cover his darkness.
Makirto and Noriko were unconscious, but breathing. Tenric stumbled but was slowly gaining what little strength he could, he sensed he would need it and soon. Tenric told the others to go on, he would catch up. As he walked he sensed someone in the area, it was Zaneth. Hett,Kaelyn,Vos and Kae walked out to the open to meet Vious and to end this pursuit. Kaelyn sensed Zaneth going back to see how Starkindler was and assumed that everyone else did too.
“I will be fine, go help the others,” Starkindler said to Zaneth. Zaneth stopped and looked at him like a Corellian Saber Cat would before it strikes its prey. “I only do what is required and helping them is not required of me,” she told him. As she stood there, he noticed she had a saber hanging from her belt, but she reached behind her back and pulled out another saber. “This is where your last stand will be my friend,” she told him. With that, a crimson blade came out of the hilt and Tenric knew he was in for a fight.
Kaelyn and Kae veered to the right and Vos and Hett took the left, this would be a battle to the finish. Vious noticed them separate and knew he had to rely on his Force speed to keep up with his opponents.
Vious’s R2 unit was rolling through the enclave when he came up on Tenric and Zaneth’s confrontation. The R2 unit stopped in front of the enclave door controls and closed the door so no one could get in to stop this battle. “I know you are not a Jedi..you are helping Palpatine hunt down the remaining Jedi”, he said to Zaneth.She nodded back at him with arrogance, “And now you will not be able to tell your secret to no one,” Zaneth said to Tenric. Zaneth knew he was weak, but he regained most of his strength, which she didn’t know. Tenric grabbed his hilt and lit it to life. “The Emperor will not stop us and neither will you,” he told Zaneth.
Kaelyn and Tailon slashed at Vious, while Vos and Hett flew through the air at him. They landed behind him and now Vious was surrounded by the four Jedi. As the Jedi had their blades pointed at Vious, he knew what he had to do. Vious jumped straight up in the air and force pushed them all to the ground as he sprang to the sky. He landed just as the Jedi got to their feet and they were on him before he could react.Vious went to force push them again, but in a show of Force of the lightside, all four Jedi blasted Vious with a force blast strong enough to knock a bantha a hundred feet. Vious flew back off the ground and as he did, his mask flew off and shattered when it hit the ground.
Vader went to his meditation chamber and brewed over what his master had told him. He sensed a change in the Force and he knew what had happened. He rose and went to the hangar to prepare his ship. The Emperor felt Vader through the Force and grinned at his apprentices motivation.
Vious laid on the ground while the Jedi approached him. He felt them through the Force and knew he had made the right decision. He opened his eyes and saw four men, his brothers in the Force, surrounding him. They all shut their sabers down and Hett extended his hand, “We felt your change, we had to do what we did...welcome back Tanzan.” He looked up dazed, but knew he was safe. He reached his hand up and was pulled up by his Jedi friends.
As he got his footing, he reached up and felt his face. The scaring had healed, although his wounds deep inside of him would never. He brushed his hand against his scalp and felt hair, a feeling that he had not in a very long time. “It is good to have you back my friend,” said Vos. “It is good to have company I can trust, Palpatine wanted me to destroy the very thing that I still held inside of me,” he told them. Tailon put his hand on Tanzan’s shoulder, “Redemption is something we all hope not to face, you conquered it…. never forget that my brother.” Tanzan nodded “We must get to the enclave and fast, Tenric is in need of our help.”
Tenric and Zaneth’s blades clashed with strong force, almost a stand still. Every move Zaneth did, Tenric blocked and parried with precise accuracy. Zaneth slashed at Tenric and caught him on his leg, “If I must, I will take you piece by piece,” she told him.
Vious’s R2 was on a mission, to delete the existence of the Jedi ever being here and wiping out the computer main frame. Just before he could hook up to the computer, the R2 was lifted in the air and was thrown into the wall and shut down...going completely offline.
Tanzan could feel the droid falling and had one last burst of energy left. As the Jedi approached the enclave, they saw they door open and Kaelyn opened it by smashing the control box. The door opened and they saw Zaneth attacking Tenric with hatred and rage. Tanzan looked at his friends and said, “Let me help him, I must help him.”
They nodded and he walked towards his destiny. He saw Zaneth pull her saber up and ready to strike down at Tenric and Tanzan rushed over to block it. With a single move, Tanzan dove in front of Tenric and took the blow across the chest, sacrificing his life for his friend. As the saber hit him, he raised his and stuck Zaneth with his and she slumped to the ground.
Zaneth got up slowly and realized Tanzan had returned to the lightside. “You were weak and that is why the Emperor sent me here to do what you couldn’t.” Zaneth’s Force sense’s were going off, but before she could react, she was hit by a incredible lightside Force blast caused by Vos, Kae,Kaelyn and Hett. She was blasted into the wall 20 feet behind her and the wall crumbled on top of her. Tenric felt her life force extinguish and she was gone, he then slumped against the wall in exhaustion and pain.
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Post by jedi12 on Jun 27, 2006 11:46:07 GMT -5
wow Tai-Lon I have some work ahead of me that was great
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Post by jedi12 on Jul 5, 2006 13:48:16 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay guys I will have something soon
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Post by Starkindler (The Naked Jedi) on Jul 10, 2006 17:08:45 GMT -5
for those interested my "Ghost Blade" story now includes an explanation of how Starkindler and Hett know each other (Ghost Blade takes place in the future and I have Tenric returning to Dantooine) as well as allusions as to why he's on Dantooine this time to begin with.
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 13, 2006 10:11:54 GMT -5
thats cool....come on Himiko..
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jul 13, 2006 17:49:58 GMT -5
could someone jump ahead of me.. my mind is fried right now from finishing Forbidden memories.. I need a break from writing for the moment
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Post by Steverus Zac on Jul 13, 2006 23:00:33 GMT -5
No PM necessary. I am ready to go. Since I didn't do any pre-work being a few places later in line, let me work on it over the weekend and post monday night.
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Post by Steverus Zac on Jul 17, 2006 0:20:41 GMT -5
OK I finished early. Since the action scene just wrapped I thought that a bridge piece to the next scene would be appropriate. Himiko I hope this lead in gives you some flexibility...
Tai-Lon Kae moved quickly to Tenric’s side and leaned in to check for wounds. “Tenric, are you injured?”
“No,” replied Kae, “Not physically at least.” He stood and walked slowly to the cluster of jedi standing over the crumpled form of Tanzan Linnear. They all looked down upon the redeemed man, the wound on his chest bubbling where the air in his lungs pushed through the cauterized flesh.
“He gave his life to save another when no other option was available.” said Kae, “That is a sacrifice we should all be willing to make.”
“And soon we may all have to make it.” observed Hett. “With two dark jedi trained this quickly to hunt us down who knows how many more there will be.”
“Then one thing is certain,” said Kaelyn “Staying together could be dangerous for the survival of the order. We should disperse as quickly as possible.”
Quinlan Vos turned from the others and folded his muscular arms. His thoughts turned to Khaleen and their newborn son, Korto. It pained him to be here, to have left them hidden away on a distant world. He had not and would not mention them to his fellow jedi. If any of them were caught and tortured by the sith then his candor could endanger his family. A family forbidden by the jedi code and at the same time his only reason for existence. His son was a hope for the rebirth of the jedi and he was going to ensure that he had every possible chance to survive. With purpose, he turned back to the group,
“Jedi Kaelyn is correct, together we give the sith too tempting a target. We must all go into hiding. Choose a world teeming with life, or a site strong in the force. It will be there that you can hide from the rabble that will pursue us.”
“But what of the Force Master Vos?” asked Tenric, “Who will ensure that the dark side is kept in check if we all go underground?”
“That’s exactly why we must Jedi Tenric,” answered Vos, “If we don’t survive to keep the light side alive we could end up just a legend, an ancient religion existing only in children’s holo-vids.”
A’Sharad Hett clipped his lightsaber to his belt with an audible snick, “Master Vos, your wisdom guides us. The sith want us to come for them, to keep them in check as you say Tenric, that way they will know where we are and destroy us.”
“Then it’s decided,” said Vos, “Return to the Fiery Jade. As I said I have a ship hidden nearby...” Before Vos could finish his sentence an immense explosion erupted outside the enclave walls. The gathered jedi all turned in the direction of the blast where a fiery plume rose into the air and shouting could be heard. It appeared that any retreat from Dantooine would be a contested one.
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 17, 2006 18:43:20 GMT -5
excellent job my friend...good short so-called pause from action..then you hit it in the end...nicely done..
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jul 18, 2006 0:59:09 GMT -5
so what kind of explosion was ti?? and I need to scatter them correct? I need an idea on what I can't do and what I can
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Post by tailonkae on Jul 18, 2006 10:11:13 GMT -5
yes scatter them and have them meet back at the fiery jade..... as for the explosion....it came from outside the enclave correct Steverus?
As for the refugees...if you want to start evacuating some of them Himiko..go ahead....
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Post by jedi12 on Jul 18, 2006 10:26:19 GMT -5
very good Steverus
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