Epic Poem...

Ryss Fal-Orran
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Epic Poem... May 1, 2003 18:25:22 GMT -5

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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on May 1, 2003 18:25:22 GMT -5

As mentioned in the Random Thoughts thread...I finished my epic poem! I've been working on it for months. It's 11 pages long in Microsoft Word, with 107 verses. Each verse has four lines, each line has four beats, and the second and fourth lines of every verse rhyme.

Enjoy it!
www.geocities.com/tsunamisedai/epicpoem.html

Oh yeah, forgot to mention that the webpage it's on is hand-coded by me...

I'm lost. I've gone to look for myself. If I get back before I return, please tell me to wait. Thanks.
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy every minute of it.
Ryss Fal-Orran
Padawan of Schph Gochi

Naibek Retnuh Message Board Member Never underestimate your opponent. Posts: 30	Epic Poem... May 1, 2003 19:11:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Naibek Retnuh on May 1, 2003 19:11:09 GMT -5 It's pretty sad, but it's really really good:D! I like the copy right.
	Last Edit: May 1, 2003 19:12:50 GMT -5 by Naibek Retnuh Naibek Retnuh - previously known as Tek Qaf There is an island of opportunity in the middle of each difficulty. Miss that, though, and you're pretty much doomed. It hurts to admit it when you make a mistake, but if it's big enough, the pain only lasts an instant.

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Epic Poem... May 6, 2003 6:42:37 GMT -5

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Post by Schph Gochi on May 6, 2003 6:42:37 GMT -5

Wow!

and Wow again....

and still another Wow....

I don't know much about poetry...I can barely write in regular form...

Your poem is AWESOME.....is there some place you can send it! Are you going to submit it somewhere?

.....and for good measure....

another WOW

"There is a greater darkness than the one we fight.
It is the darkness of the soul that has lost its way.
Greater than the death of flesh is the death of hope,
the death of dreams.
Against this peril we can never surrender"
livefromthegalaxyfarfaraway.blogspot.com/

Ryss Fal-Orran Jedi May The Force Be With You Posts: 967	Epic Poem... May 6, 2003 9:02:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on May 6, 2003 9:02:33 GMT -5 takes a bow Thanks...'twas fun to write.
	I'm lost. I've gone to look for myself. If I get back before I return, please tell me to wait. Thanks. I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy every minute of it. Ryss Fal-Orran Padawan of Schph Gochi

Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on May 1, 2003 18:25:22 GMT -5

Post by Naibek Retnuh on May 1, 2003 19:11:09 GMT -5

Post by Schph Gochi on May 6, 2003 6:42:37 GMT -5

Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on May 6, 2003 9:02:33 GMT -5