Kesshi's story review+ Story Notes

[Kesshi]

Thats for you much needed input, see my reply for Story Notes.

[Xak Bigzalj]

I liked it but it could have been a bit more suspenseful. If you read Continue the Quest, you will realize that I put TO BE CONTINUED after a suspenseful part. I would not mind if you did that in your story.

[Toba Qaf]

It's good, but you could make it less predictable. Keep going!

[Kesshi]

I do have two very big surprises for a few chapters up

[Kesshi]

+Story Notes+=/= The purpuse for these note is so that you may have a better understanding of how the story flows.

---Story Lay out---
-introduction= From Chapters 1 to Chapter 8
--Main idea=to introduce kesshi before he
was a Jedi.
-rising action=From Chapters 10 to chapter14
--Main idea=to show how Kesshi became a
Jedi.
-Climax= From Chapters 15 to chapter 20
--main idea=to show the time kesshi spent
in the Rebel Allience.
- Falling Action=Chapters 20 to Chapters 30
--Main idea= show Kesshi's life as a Jedi/
Master/ husband/ Father
-Cunclustion= From Chapters 31 to chapter 33
--Main idea= shows Kesshi trian his kids.

I will later post a time line to show where the story takes place compare to the Star Wars Univers ( Expanded and Movies) Also the order of chapters in which events take place may change.
Well thats all for now, May the Force flow through your pens.( Or keyboards, LOL)

[Schph Gochi]

Oooooooh....this is a great idea!

Hmmmmmm starts to think about "dramatis personae"

[Kesshi]

Sorry I'm still working on The story I just have lease time.

[Kesshi]

You've read my mind in refrince to the Personal, thats a cool feature.( espacily if there are alote of carictors.
And about the suthingye I think that I would post the 2nd part of Kesshi's life untile I'm finish writing it.( Yes I have decied to make it a Triology it makes the story flow better.)


[glow=red,2,300]Kesshi's Rise To Knighhood( Charater list) {ruff draft}[/glow]

Kesshi=Human/Male ( This Spy turned Jedi Padawan's mother was killed when he was just 15. When on a spying mission for the Jedi Kesshi was reqested to take Yoda into hiding. Now he is training to become a Jedi Knight.)

Sarice=Human/Male ( Sarice is Kesshi's Father. Sarice is a one time Mercenary now moster farmer. Sarice has been missing for weeks, and is being hunted by the Deadly Pleagu for the muder of Trubel the Hutt.)

Greener= Artoo Unite ( This little droid was sold to Kesshi when he was leaving Tatoine. Now this little droid is Kesshi's partner.)

Black Pleagu= Human/Male ( This Bounty Hunter is the leader of the group of bounty Hunters called the Deadly Pleagu. Most of the time you could find him snd his thugs working for Turbel the Hutt. Now he is hunting for Sarice.)

Turbel the Hutt= Hutt/ heraferdit ( An crime lord on the planet Tatowine. Was killed by Sarice.)

[Kesshi]

My first book is now finished. I'll get it posted ASAP.