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Post by hathorsg1x on Apr 12, 2006 10:08:49 GMT -5
Title: Goodbye Master Author: Hathor_SG1X Rating: G Genre: angsty goodness Pairing: Qui-Gon Jinn/Obi-Wan Warnings: Spoilers for E1 TPM Summary: This poem was inspired to me by EP1 of Star Wars and the theme song you hear playing for Qui-Gons body being burned. This is all from Obi-Wan Kenobi's POV as he goes through the loss of his beloved Master. This is my 1st SW work I made, so enjoy ^_^; Gone he is, his soul has fled the shell defeated ever so simply how could I have not made that last step? Prevented I could have. Prevented I did not. I held you in my arms I shed my tears My soul aked to feel yours fading Don't leave me Master So much I had planed for Now I watch the flames eat your husk. Your beautiful soul is gone, your husk begins to turn to ash. Given to me they are, I head for the highest point in Coruscant, The wind nips around me I clench the urn with you in it. I watch the sun rise alone yet, I sense you beside me Master. A simple kiss I give to you, this is our farewell... I watch the gray vanish with the wind, I remain tall, yet my tears still fall. Goodbye my beloved Master...
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 12, 2006 11:34:10 GMT -5
Wow very good,it really shows the love and respect between a padawan and his master
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