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Post by Xorren Hedrasii on Apr 7, 2006 21:38:08 GMT -5
Cool! but soooo short!
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Post by tailonkae on Apr 7, 2006 21:45:35 GMT -5
short may be...but it leaves you wondering what is about to happen....
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Apr 11, 2006 2:06:59 GMT -5
NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!! MORE...SOON PLEASE..
*Gets on knees and begs*
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Post by tailonkae on Apr 11, 2006 10:10:55 GMT -5
more is coming...just in the process of moving.....
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 11, 2006 19:39:52 GMT -5
Wow really good Tai-Lon
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 17, 2006 20:21:14 GMT -5
Waiting for a new installment
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Post by tailonkae on Apr 18, 2006 10:41:27 GMT -5
Next installment this Friday.....
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Post by Jauhzmynn Enz on Apr 18, 2006 13:13:50 GMT -5
All of this is one gripping story. Makes me eager for the next portion. Excellant writting TaiLon.
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 18, 2006 15:12:54 GMT -5
Most Excellant Writing Tai-Lon
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Post by tailonkae on Apr 25, 2006 0:26:53 GMT -5
Thank you all...sorry for the delay...work and getting settled in new place...will try to have it up by friday...it will be worth the wait...
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Post by Solinbeb Newau on Apr 25, 2006 1:08:13 GMT -5
Thank you all...sorry for the delay...work and getting settled in new place...will try to have it up by friday...it will be worth the wait... No hurry.
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 25, 2006 10:56:44 GMT -5
Very cool can't hardly wait
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Post by tailonkae on Apr 28, 2006 15:38:03 GMT -5
As we make our approach to the planet Carida, we get a
transmission from the a local starport to clear us for landing. We
land in a small hangar no bigger than the ones in Mos Eisley.
TaiLon Kae pays the docking fees and Mon Jas gets hisgear
ready. We have to use discretion when inquiring about our
mission here. We get a speeder and ask where the training
facility is. After a few preparations, we head towards the facility,
not knowing what to expect. It’s a good 3000 km to the site and
we had to get clearance from the facilities tower to approach.
When we arrive, the training facility commander greets us and
asks what is our business here. “We are seeing how many more
troops are ready and to see which are not”said Mon Jas.
As we walk with the commander, Master Kae senses something
is not right in the facility. I nod at Mon Jas and he nods in return.
We get to our room we will be staying in, “I hope our
accommodations will suit you” the commander says. We nod and
he leaves us to return to his duties. “Did you feel that when we
walked in the corridor” Master Kae says to Mon Jas. He nods
back, “Yes and it is a disturbing feeling, we must find where it is
coming from and soon” Mon Jas says.
We wait until nightfall to move around the facility, the darkness
will cloak ourmovement.
Himiko looks at the figure and unclips her saber, a blue hue
emits from the hilt. “I see you don’t talk much, maybe this will
change your mind” she told the figure. “Thisss will be your
downfall” the figure said to Himiko. The dark figure slashed at
Himiko and she blocked then slashed and parried followed by a
kick to the sternum of the figure. The dark figure flew back
against the wall and knocking one of the sabers out of their
hand. “I have underestimated you young one, but that will be
the last time” they said.
Himiko slashed at the figure and the crimson blade of
the figure blocked her move, the figure then Force pushed her
into the wall. Himiko got up and kicked the figure again, this time
sending them head over heals onto the ground.
Gripping her hilt, she was prepared forthe next attack. The
figure got up and extended her hand and began to Force choke
her. Himiko tried to struggle to get out of the grasp, but her
vision faded to darkness and her saber hilt hit the ground. “You
will succumb to my masters will or you will die” the dark figure
said while standing over Himiko’s body.
Just then Jaryk came around the corner to see Himiko on the
ground motionless and this figure over her. “What have you
done to her” he said and charge with his saber ignited. The dark
figure picked Himiko up and called up a Force storm to mask her
tracks. The wind and dust blocked Jaryk’s vision and when he
could see again, all he saw was her hilt on the ground. “d**n it,
now I have to explain why Himiko is missing, Master Kae
will not like this at all” Jaryk said to himself.
Master Vos returns to his quarters and sends a transmission out…….
Vos: The plan is working well Count Dooku.
Dooku: Good, see to it that they suspect nothing of your betrayal.
Vos: I will
Dooku: And what of this mission you heard of?
Vos: They were headed to Carida, but that is all I know.
Dooku: Good, I will do the rest.
Transmission ended……………..
Meanwhile, Master Jorlac is listening on a hidden device and
shakes his head in disapproval. Master Jorlac heads to the comm.
Center to send a message to Master Kae and Charan of the
latest development.
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Post by Xorren Hedrasii on Apr 28, 2006 16:19:58 GMT -5
*applauds* Very Nice!
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Post by jedi12 on Apr 28, 2006 18:22:48 GMT -5
WooHoo..... Wow Tai-Lon that is great I like it very much
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