DELLERO'S REVENGE

[ALDAN JII]

OOC: THIS IS NOT A STAR WARS FAN FIC, BUT ONE I HAVE BEEN WROKING ON FOR CLOSE TO 20 ODD YEARS.
I HOPE THIS STORY ISN'T TO VILOLENT , BUT IF IT IS,I WILL GIVE IT A RATING OF STRONG R.......




DELLERO'S REVENGE
written by d.b. alsman
a.k.a. als-da aldan
( iwill begin to post it here tomorrow evening.)

[ALDAN JII]

the year, 2665 a.d.:

scene 1
(in the topening scene we can see two men in an alley having blaster battle each shooting at the other ,both men are cussing and harassing the other.{for the kiddies i will edit as i write,}

powers; you missed, and you're suppose to a good shot.

dellero; bite me michael !!!!!

powers; not my flavor.

dellero;i'm the mower , and the grass needs mowing.

scene 2;

(powers projects a holo image of himself behind dellero. powers returns a volley of fire at dellero, which inturn delero takes every shot, fleshy chunks are blown from dellero's body. dellero also returns blaster fire, dellero is the greatest of pain, but continues to fire his volley.and begins to run down the alley, dellero crashes thruogh a wooden fence like it was balsa wood, dellero staggers from the pain into the hoover lanes, from no where dellero is plastered by a drunk driver. his body hits hard against the hoovr van, his body has made a comical body impression in the frint of the van, dellero slowly pulls his face from the windsheild, dellero's flesh is imbedded in the windshield with out a grimace of pain dellero rams his hand thruogh the windshiled, and squeezes the driver's throat until his head pops off.)

scene 3;

(seconds later powers runs down the alley blaster raised, and ready to fire, he looks down as he passes where dellero stood, a pool of blodd, bloody chunks of meat scatter and strewn about, blood splatter patterns on the walls. dellero now free from the van, he looks up and sees michael powers running down the alley.)

dellero; aint this some.....!?

scene 4;

( as powers gets closer, powers stumbles over what appears to be deelro's right arm, which in fact was blown off in the battle. dellero starts blasting everything in sight, hitting and destroying several hoover cars, also hitting powers in various areas.)

dellero; i will be ..............!( dellero shrugs and puffs out a big breath.)

scene 5;

(powers returns a volley of heavy blaster fire, more chunks are blown from dellero's body, a major chunk of flesh is blown from dellero's right thigh, he goes down hard, somehow dellero pulls himself to his feet runs off in a limp. dellero crashes thruogh a door leading to a futuristic mall powers already there, he anticpates delero's move, powers goes in for the final blood bath.)

powers; (yelling out so everyone can hear him.) this is supertrooper michael powers, everyone to the ground now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (walking to dellero) okay big boy, drop your weapons and assume the positiion !!!!

dellero; (raising his blaster pistol and points it at powers) last time powers, you suck. (suddenly dellero fires at powers, inturn powers runs at dellero and fires back and also does a flying side drop kick.the inpact sends dellero thruogh a plate glass window, dellero still more than capable of destroying anything in his path, stands up he has large shards of glass sticking out ofvarious location in his body.)

scene; 10

9dellor then pulls his rifle from his back and fires volley after volley, dellero levels the people and the store fronts and takes powers down a few notches also.)

[Als-da Aldan]

ahhhhhhhhh, my sedcond non star wars thread still exists, that's cooooooooooool.