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Post by ALDAN JII on May 29, 2003 23:29:40 GMT -5
orphaned at birth, left to die by those who destroyed the transport ship he and his family were traveling on.......... was found in the still burning crash by a young down and out padawan, Oola Tot, a twi'lek female(purplish skin tone). i mean by down and out her master was killed in the bounty hunter conflict, so she's on her own..............
by taking in this human/zabrak man child, she now had the family she never had either.............naming the baby ALS-DA ALDAN, after her jedi master............. she alone raised this child and trained him in the ways of the force taught to her by the deceased master she still morns.
Als-da Aldan, went his way into the galaxay at the young age of 13. upon his 14th year, a solomn man took him in and revealed himself as jedi master D' amascus, one of the few survivors of alderan, but was off world decades before the empire destroyed it...
D' amascus, a jedi master from a time long forgotten, an old an escentric jedi, mindful of whom to pass his knowledge of the force and the edi skills needed in the galaxy..................
some say D' amascus, is as old as yoda, and even more feirce !
als-da Aldan, has stood along side his master thruogh thick and thin, any mission the council decided to send them on they completed.......now an unkonwn jedi master in his own right............Als-da aldnastood at the funeral pyers and ignited the cremetorial for his master with his deep orange quad bladed light saber(giving to him by his mother Oola Tot) ! the only father he ever knew , morning his loss and accepting that which his master was destin to pass to him.......... flames engulfing the body of D' amascus, an errie orange almost red glow appears, bright as a sunset on tatooine, with out gesture the glow disapates to nothingness...............
Als-da Aldan, now reaching his 38th year, in these those yearshe has trained many padawans to jedi or knight status. still in the shadows of the current jedi council - they know of his presence and keep his where abouts hidden............he maybe the one that will truly bring balance to the force!
A founding memeber of the order called the jedi of the red sash, the sash reprsents in memory of the fallen jedi passed and present...........now the only survivor of the order........which all died of unknown fashions... suspected ly caused by bounty hunters......
Als-da Aldan - known in some circles as the ghost master, the mythical jedi, the legend !!!!!!!!! but i assure you , i do exist !!!!!!!!!
an excellent pilot, rumor has it he, Als-da Aldan owned a certain hunk of junk long before it would known to many as the fastest hunk of junk in the galaxy.....this rumor has cached rumors of certain twins being born on board on the way to alderan, and his ownership of this ship preceeds ownership to lando calrision........if these rumors are true this is a small galaxy....! after the births of said twins - no one knowshow or what happened to this ghost jedi master.........
For now i sit and wait , wait for the coming of the dark one..............I am prepared for the sith, are you !?
my favorite padawan was Deej, a young rambunctious ewok,,, the barriers were few, but the force connected each of us to make his training easier.......but overall he was a great learner..............
i was told that i was from the planet farthest from...........
more advetures to come...........
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 14, 2003 22:51:41 GMT -5
chapter two standing at the foot of a singular grave site, a shadowed man, just standin g there amidst the rain , and gloom , before him a three foot tall gravestone......it reads Oola Tot, beloved mother and jedi master............. beside her monument stands another obolisque, it reads my friend and padawan Deej these were the only family i ever knew, a twi'lek female, and a rambuncious ewok leaner................for him i write this.............. TEXT My Friend, Gone ! along time have we been together you and i, from your cub hood, to your grave, and all things in bewtween you're my friend, and now you're gone you have gone home to the golden feilds of heaven there to play with my other old friends wan and bear, these two were characters in their own right, but you my friend deej my friend and compainion during those long cold winter months, and long dark colder nights i look at the spot you once laid upon my eyes water up, a tear ,sigular, flows down my cheek you were the strongest personality i had ever had the pleasure of knowing, i am deeply sadened of you going from my side no more fussing or grumbling shall i hear from you,or ever shall i share my meals with you never more your gentle hugs as you passed each test set before you, never to replaced by anohter, for there was one deej, my firend, my padawan learner we were together that fateful day,your very last day with mei'll always have a place in my heart for you, my padawan learner, my ewok friend, my best friend you're gone now, i must say goodbyes, but as i say them, i say them with tears in my eyes this is hard..........so very hard but i must say them, and share the fact of how much you meant to me, i say this in this poem, and on a bent knee you are the best friend i ever had, my family you were and forever shall you be my friend , gone ! goodbye deej, young jedi i will miss you, probably more than i should or thought i could goodbye from me your master, your friend, your family rest in peace, my old friend MY FRIEND, GONE !
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 14, 2003 23:31:10 GMT -5
still standing at the foot of both graves, stopping for a moment , hearing a familar voice............
"als-da, you have become stronger than imaginable with the force, i taught you well my son...." mother , i reply ! you have been watching over me.....you have seen all my greif and victories.....?
"i have als-da you made the the two moons glow brighter, made me smile deeper than ever, you being in my life my son, was force send, i found you by way of the force, and and i raised you accordingly........." Oola, why have you come to me !? "i have come to you Als-da to set your path right to help further your guidance in the force, time to move on my son, all those that you trained or loved, are here with me, they are safe and rejoceful, and they all say to me,tell als-da to move forward, continue to train those that need training, teach them the ways of the force."
"travel to ther system of saccuos 4, there you you find that which you have been seeking...........!"
Oola, mother,after the wars and after the losses of all those i trained, and befriended, all gone are they, i want no ore , i just want my peace of mind, i want .......
"ahhhhhh, you want, the thing you want most, is to train jedi, as i trained you, and als-br aldan trained me .... find your learner on saccous4........."
the ghostly image fades, as i continue walking to my ship, the storm......a small but beefy starfighter class ship, four persons maximum.......!
i turn and look at the graves once more before departing, i see the image of my mother once more, just a glimpse, as she disappears behind a boulder, which sits some yards from the graves themselves............
saccous 4 does not appear on any of the current star charts, as i scramble about my data pads , the storm hums to a brilliant roar, the engines glowing that irridescant blue glow..i look once more, nothing there, was i seeing things, or was Oola Tot actually there talking to me..............i questioned this conversation for many hours and days!
shuting my thingypit, i press a red button on my ship's console, and in seconds i am hundreds of miles from my previous location.............
in my mind i hear Oola tot, the same phrase,"find that which you seek..." my adopted mother always had a way with words.... i laugh to myself and set the co-ordinates for saccous 4.......! before me i see the stars begin to swirl , and brighten, and with out hesitation light speed, and soon after hyperspace.......!
laughing to myself, dont go passed your starship, Als-da, as you've been known to do in the passed as deej would so kindly remind me .... ! there we go, coming out of hyperspace now, ahhhhhhhhhhhh, what a beautiful sight, the starship D' A MASCUS. i named this old hulking star destroyer wreck after my my former jedi master!
the D'AMASCUS' compliment
personel: 56 humans 400 droids of varying designs and stature..... from astro mech droids to mouser droids,( the little black droids on the deathstar, which chewy scarred by growling at it.)
i have been told that the d' amascus was a protype of the now famous star destroyers...........i'm not a dark soul, just knows a bargain when i see one.............the 56 humans, i meant to say humanoids, from wookies to humans and anything in between............!
now on the bridge of the d' amascus, i give the helmsman the co-ordinates for saccous 4, and tell them at his leisure,,,, she asks me if i was correct in stating saccous 4, i nodded my head, and then said to her..... second star on left and stria ght on 'til morning.........!
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 20, 2003 2:31:00 GMT -5
chapter 3; to saccous 4
niner prep the storm for the d' amascus, and once there prep my freight for the run to saccous 4. i shall join you shortly........
walking away from the grave stones, the ghostly figure fades from all sight, the voice now silent........!
niner, set co-ordinates for the saccous system, saccous 4 to be precise......... and sultry femine voice replies, master why are going to this system , nothing there but a mining colony, and a few scattered villianous space ports, the red zone of the system............i know niner, i know as i reply to my female c3po type droid...... niner is short for m3n9, i call her niner.......... more feminely shaped than 3po, has a blue steel look to her, i found her in a scrud heap, and re-programed her and practically re-built and re-furbished her whole form, her left eye is the only thing that worked on her when i found her in peices...............
stepping aboard the storm, a marauder crovette class type ship, the hatch closes behind me. slowly i make my way to the thingypit, where niner is finishing her duty of pre-paring the ship..............a small shuttle type ship, quite kool looking! niner wake me when we arrive at at the D'amascus so we can change to the destiny for our trip to saccous 4....i'm getting a little sleepy, i need my rest, . niner softly replies, with her soothing voice, sleep well master aldan, i will apprise you of any discretions in the course headings..i hold my hand up and ask niner to shush, nicely though, niner, keep her steady, and you'll get thruogh this,i never have seen a droid so afraid of flying as you...master niner replies, i am a droid sir, we are not afraid of anything...............but of course you're not afraid, laughing out loud, niner twists her head and then shakes it as walk to my baracks, four beds total in this particular area of the ship........
niner, i felt something this day...........niner replies, that would be master aldan !?
i felt at peace today, something i haven't had in my life for so many years, so many years............this is good master aldan replied niner ! niner, old friend, this is a great thing.....
niner fiddles with the console and taps some buttons....master, pre-paring for hyper jump..........on my mark niner,go.............the ship seems to stop in mid flight, everything goes silent, suddenly a thunderous boom sounds from the engines, and then ship speeds off into a whirling hyber space vortex, niner wake me when we arrive at saccuos 4....you have the bridge all to yourself, and one more thing niner, yes master Aldan?
no matter what i get , some sleep.........in her smooth soothing sultry voice she responds, but master,what if there is a need to wake you.......... i raise my hand to her and say shhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you are fine niner, the storm is in capable droid hands..........shh relax niner you will be fine................ trust me i will know if any trouble or danger arises far before your sensors sound off........relax, and enjoy your first piloting excersice.......
i walk to my baracks, there are four births in this particualr area of the ship, twelve births in total..............i take off my long billowing grey hooded robe, losen my buckles on my boots,take my belt and saber off from my waist, remove and lay my tunic and (no tabbards)on the bunk across from me,losen my blue under tunic at the nech,crack my knuckles, and proceed to lay back in my bed,,,,,,,,,,,,,my quad saber close by as always, not to mention my two back up sabers...........sometimes it gets a little paranoid out here all alone, so i like to be prepared..........
the lights dim over my birth, i raise my hand to turn them out, the room goes completely dark,cept for the leds on my saber which glow constantly..............i lay back and melt into my pillow and bed......................!mmmmmmmmmm refrshing and relaxing.................niner........yes matser aldan...........niner, a a a aremind me when we land to get you an oil bath, you havent had one in so long.......... niner responds, master,,,, how lovely an oil bath, bless the maker,niner stops talking, and tilts head to right and says to self, my word, he is the maker.............night niner.......keep an even and steady course, alert me if we run into trouble.... yes master Aldan..............
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 27, 2003 0:51:39 GMT -5
several days have passed since aldan went into stasis, niner revives him, and informs him of saccous 4 on approach.............
master aldan, how was your sleep ? the femine droid asks................
niner the nap was the best rest and sleep i have had in months.........set co-ordinates for final approach...........yes master aldan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,niner simply inputs the data alsdan programed into her sensor and memory...... co-ordinates set master.................
good droid,,,,,,,,,, i'll be in back practicing the sabers,,,,,,,, when we land inform me, so i may put your outerskins on,,,,,,,,
master i have my skins sir.............. niner i have something that will help you much more than metal hides,on saccous 4 a droid such as you would be destroyed on site, your appearance must be that of a humanoid nature.....................niner replies,,,,,,,,,,,,,oooooooooooo myyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!!!!!!!
the destiny lands on a ruggedly built landing platform........
master we have landed, docking clamps are engaged.........ship stablizing................... in the back area aldan mentioned we see him in the midst of saber training, has his quad blade in his right hand, his back saber in his left hand and with the force, he is controlling a third saber with a beautiful dimagold bldaed saber (dimagold is a diamond type gem with gold nuggest inlayed in the gemstone.....) a spectacular looking blade.........beleived to be the very first saber aldan built at the age of 16 ...........................his master was very impressed at aldan's skill and construction technique.............
master, niner calls out...... master aldan, ship is secured to landing pad..............
good and calls the force controlled saber to his waist, and puts his quad blade to his left hip,,,,,,, and the back up sword he places up his sleeve to his tunic, which attaches to an arm bracer on his right forearm.......... while turning to niner.......... follow me.......the two walk towards a oddly shaped alcove of the destiny......... i'm glad i lost that hunk of junk...........the destiny is abit bigger in places, plus the the other one didn't have one of these.............. the hatch opens and i bright light immidately comes on............ aldan tells niner to enter the chamber............ get in............ trust me niner you will be different, but yet the same...........and once your completed i will install the padawan program in your memory banks..................
niner replies,,,,,,,,,,, padawan program....... master.............
als-da aldan places his finger on niner's droid mouth, and says shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... just get into the chamber........
niner gets into the chamber the hatch closes behind her......... a rainbow colored lights flash and then go white.................then a plethera of beeps and pings follows, thirty minutes later the process complete..........
the hatch opens, a steamy fog billows from the chamber,....chest down is all aldan can see of niner............
wow it worked...........you look great niner,,,,, but we'll have to get you dressed and programed, and for this mission you be nic-er wodan, my padawan, you are from the xagobahin the outer rimof the galaxy....... your programing will commence after you are clothed as a padawan.........................master aldan.......aldan responds, your voice has even been changed.................niner graciously speaks in her human sounding voice............master it has been changed, the droid looks her new skins over and realizes she has a humannoid skin, for that humanoid appearance...................everything has been altered......
relax aldan tells the worried droid,just relax you will be returned to normal once we get back to corasaunt...........i need your help this time niner, i mean nic-er wodan......droids are to destroyed one they step onto the landing port.........lets get your garb on and after you have dressed,pick your saber..........they will be on the chess table in the corner............
afew minutes have passed, niner a.k.a nc-er wodan emerges from the birthing area( the bunks.)nic-er wodan is dressed in the following jedi garb,,,,,,,,,,,
the 6 peice tunic consists of the following colors.........
medium tannish turtleneck under tunic.......... a golden or brassy light chain mail over the under tunic, trimmed in gold around the neck, it veees to mid cleavage area, revealing the under tunic in the veeeeeee...................same tannish outer tunic.... black braied leather wrist gaurds.............a medium red shoulder stoles(tabbards) and a medium red skirt applique attached to her waist wrap(obi) tabbards cross at the mid belly, and then overlap and make one tabbard in looks........... a medium brown waist wrap...................same medium brown jedi belt braided and secured to an ellegant buckle the skirt aplique has a gold band trim at the bottom hem.............pants are same medium brown as the belt, has long waist length hair,,,,,,,,has threee padawan braids on the right side of the head,,,,,,,,,,,,rear braid just tied once and let dropped to waist....... boots are simular to als-da aldan's boots which are black , nic-er wodan's bots are also black,,,,,,,,, kneee high boots, with seven buckles on each outer side of each boot...............................very alurring eyes,pouty lips,,,,,, very sexy considering nic-er is a protacol droid and looks something like the white 3po in hoth rebel base......................finally the outer over robe,,,,,,,,,tanish to match the tunic
als-da aldan inserts the new program module and waits for it to up-load......................up-load complete............master aldan i feel so different.........niner you are different you make a beautiful human, something i think the hutts would love to have.................(laughing out loud at that remark to niner....................)master aldan, will i be able to mave and act as a jedi? niner asks aldan........ with a grin and simple reply...........yes you will be just like me lol.........let us get started...........
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 30, 2003 0:40:21 GMT -5
chapter 4
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jun 30, 2003 0:45:46 GMT -5
the quest begins for that which i seek..............
niner, how do you like your new skins.................!?
niner looks at herself in the mirror,pleased master.....very pleased.........how do i look to you master.....!/ like a beautiful woman with a droids cold steel innereds, but that's what makes you so special, with some prctice betwen here and saccous4, you'll do just fine........
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 2, 2003 1:52:32 GMT -5
i will try to do my best master niner says in her new more human voice...............wow,,,,,,,niner, that was perfect, perfect enough to throw the scum that live on saccous 4 way off your droid self........... master aldan-asks niner,,, master tell me of saccous 4?
the destiny launches to the sky and heavens, while settling from the hyper jump, aldan tells niner of saccous4...............well niner, saccous 4 is much like tantooine,,,,,,with one exception....it is worse ..... set the co-ordinates for saccous 4......
worse,oh my!!!!!! is the cowardly responce of niner........calm down niner, in this form they'll not even look twice............your droid parts are covered perfectly, your audible device is working fine......i see and sense no flaws in you at all.......
aldan goes to his birth and dis robes from the outer heavier woolen robe, and neatly folds and places it on the bench beside his bed.............he removes the saber attached to his rear belt area, and lays it on the woolen robe.......walks to the mirror, and uses his laser razor and shaves his scruffy beard and mustache off completely...... has been many days and nights since his last shave............he looks at his dressing wall standard (a built in dresser in the wall) and opens the top drawer........there are three holocrons.........he taps the farthest to his left first.........a hologram of his adopted mother Oola Tot, the hologram has her doing the saber dance........as the dance is completed aldan shuts it down and smiles................to the middle holocron.............Deej the ewok padawan during the apprentice trials..................a single tear begins to well up in aldan's left eye................again he smiles and disengages the hologram....................the farthest right holocron..............................arch master D' amascus...... speaking of the force to aldan..............the smiles continues,, as he dis-engages this hologram...........he turns and shuts the drawer in one motion................as aldan walks to his bed, he lets his hair down, long flowing hair, drapes over both shoulders..................now at the mirrior again, he see the old padawan braids he kept as a memoriam to Oola Tot, and D' amascus,, each braid has several different color bands in them...............i better get rid of these if this mision is to succeed,the scum and villiany on sccous 4 , well they dont like jedi, and definately hate droids...........(he sasy this to the mirror) with his laser razor, he snips the braids off and musses his hair to cover the braid shave points....................then folds them and places abraid to a master's holocron.......................
now returning to his birth(bunk)..............reads a few datapads, and looks at one continuously for several minutes.........................Tia-an aldan, my bride, my beautiful bride..........................i can not imagine why he took you from me.......................tears stream forth from both eyes........he reaches and feels the tears from his right eye...........amazing, for nearly 20 years now, not so much as a twitch from i eye, but now, a solomn tear..................my anger was as strong as his was when he took you from me, and turned you to the dark side, i know not where youare or if you still live,,,,,,,,,,just to see your face and touch your soft skin, and inhale your fragrance............i would truly live once again..........closing the datapad, and wipping the tears away............i will find you my wife........Tia-an Aldan. i will find you and set things right.............as a jedi i promise you this my love..........................
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 2, 2003 2:12:08 GMT -5
chapter 5; Als-da Aldan's nighmare in poetic form
the terror in my head is truly real, most of you,if not all of you can comprhend how i feel....
the terror in my head, would drive an insane person mad, the terror i speak of, it the only friend i have ever really had, from childhood until now, maybe to the grave, nothing i do can free of its grasp. i fear i am its slave, forever wandering why i am here, what is my purpose in life,on this blue greying planet, we call home! ? the terror in my head, no one can understand this thing inside my mind, no animals or any of mankind......
the terror i speak is lifetime of loneliness, you were lost to me tia-an Aldan, my wife! the only one person that undestood me.....now gone from me..........with all the souls in the galaxy, knowing not one for me............ having this thought has tempted me many times to cross over but my will keeps me strong and continuing the fight, the injustice the dark one did to me, by taking you to the darkside............this thought i just mentioned is the terror i speak of, the terror in my head, knowing you picked him, and the darkside over me..............until i find you or my demise, i will always be alone and lonely in the galaxy..........may the force be with you my bride...................
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 2, 2003 23:39:33 GMT -5
nightmarishly Aldan rolls and quakes in his bed,,, talking loudly unknowingly what he is doing,,, flashes of his beloved bride pass in and out of his mind, the iron lung sound in the background, a darkened hand tugs and pulls tia-an aldan away ..................lightning flashes thnder breaks in the distance of the nightmare...............
a reconizable figure enters the birth, and walks to aldan, the leds rom the saber hilt lights up niner's face partially........................she speaks, softly and in her human voice...........................................
master aldan, please wake from your nightmare ! in a worried voice she repeats the message .........................
without warning the quad bladed saber is ignited and stops just shy of niner's throat and neck area,aldan catches himself just before he would have destroyed niner.....................
master,,,,o my......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i apologize niner, i thought you were ..................!
you thought i was whom master aldan!? still with worry in her voice.................the dark one.....................my old friend...............now my worst enemy................... as he is the worsed os the worsed for all jedi......................why are you in here, niner!? in responce niner answers......master aldan, saccous 4 on approach, three minutes until touch down...........!!!!!!!!
the destiny lands at the farthest most landing pad....... the ship cools and the after thruster fire out the extra blasts of boyances in steam form....................
aldan re-dresses and with fresh tunics, after he has showered in the sonic bathe..................let us seek that for which we came to seek out........................
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 3, 2003 0:40:48 GMT -5
chapter 6; first contact
Als-da Aldan and niner exit the destiny via the starboard landing ramp........ the mist of the landing pad rises and billows up wards, rolling off the hull of the destiny...............they both walk a distance, when from no where a gamorian thug just appears from the mist........................snorting and oinking and squealling liek his counter part at jabba's ranchor pit............ aldan knows the language as well as he knows his own...................aldan replies....the gamorian pulls a vibro axe, and and swings it at niner, the blade catches her across the left upper shoulder, she falls to the ground.....without hesitation aldan uses his force to grab his rear saber, and his hipped saber now also ignited, the gamorian fights with aldan, ...........simpky aldan destroys the vibro axe...............................the gamorian pulls a vibro knife this time and cuts aldan's hand, aldan looks at the gamorian and with each sabers takes each of the gamorian's ahnds, as the gamorian drops to his knees and squeals like a stuck pig (lol)..... three more thugs rush aldan.... from nowhere, niner is her master's back, the two of them defend their ground and mame the thugs, ....the battle stops........aldan looks over the battle scene, tells niner to move quickly, both examine the datapad... and follow the map on the screen........the destination a smokey dead end back alley.............only one door way, they knock at the door..........a small asian looking woman answers the door............ to dark to be identified.............
we seek shelter........can you help us..... aldan asks the woman..................we can pay you if you wish it...........................
what i seek,as payment you cannot pay me..................... the woman answers........i have been away far to long for him to reconize me.................., sorry, my friends.........i was thinking of my husband..................he was killed years ago by the dark one...............and i was taken as his prisoner and slave.....................nothing can bring my beloved husband back to me, now that he is dead these many years...............
the asian looking lady closes the door, and motions the two guest to come and sit at her table.................aldan has his back to the asian lady.............niner looks at her as if to reconize her from pictures in aldan's data pad......
ninier, speaks to aldan.... master are we safe...........!?
replying yes niner,we are safe.................
the lady........asks aldan to speak again...............master jedi...............you are a jedi are you not..............i saw the battle only a jedi and his or her padawan could have fended of so many so quickly...............slowly turning his head.........ma'am, your voice is very familar to me..........................as yours does to me............
let me see your face.......the asian looking lady asks aldan......please turn for me, and let see you
als-da aldan turns..............his patch is to the asian looking lady................she sees the profile she once fell in love with decades ago...........als-da, my husband..........is that you............by the jedi gods, it is you.............................shocked from the asian looking lady........tia-an, flabberghasted that she is still alive........you became his........he took you from me........................
no my love he imprisoned me, made me a slave, totured me..................told he had killed you, and that i should not resist..........................................................!!!!!!!!!!
your eye, how, how did you lose your eye,als-da.......!?
he took it.........! oh my god, als-da, i am so sorry for what has done to you thruogh me....... tia-an walks to aldan and they hug trying to make up for decades lost and taken from them by him...........my husband, i have truly longed for you, and missed you emmencely.........................i have never forgotten you...nor have i you my love............i always pary to see you and hold you again.....................
mother................a teenage girl enters the room from the door aldan and niner entered...............mother, a new ship has landed at the port.................maybe it is him.........!!!!!!!!
tia-an repsonds to her............shi-lo,let me introduce to you, .................the girl knows who the man is.............
father!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(gulps with nerves) she begins to cry and tia-an goes to comfort her...............
tia-an hugs her daughter, and aldan goes to them also.......... niner sits and watches and records everything on her memory banks...............the seprated are now family again.....a tear flows from niner's human eye.......
tia-an, shi-lo, this is niner my droid..................she's in a camoflauged state..................niner stands and grets the ladies, mistress tia-an,mistress shi-lo very please to finally meet you...............the aldan's acknowledge niner's presence............
time to leave..................before trouble brews.......
why are leaving..........this is our home als-da..... mine and shi-lo's home.................stay with us......... father please............your mother and i are jedi, i feel you to become a jedi..........please come to corasaunt ,return home with tia-an,please................!!!!!!!??
there all will be safe, our home still remains...........i never changed the details..................it is our home.......come back with me..................surely all is forgotten and forgiven............................
als-da, you mean this truly...i feel it....!!!yes i mean it ,,,,for fifteen years i have searched and hunted for you.......hoping a child would be there, my son or daughter.....................................there on corasaunt, my daughter, you will be trained as a jedi, live life to it's fulest, dream dremas of happiness and honor, the jedi council would so welcome you both home............i know they would............this much they owe me for the things i've done for them.............come back with and live the way you both should......with me..............!
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 5, 2003 0:47:57 GMT -5
chapter 7;
the next morning we see Aldan meditating.
stirring takes place in the bedroom, tia in her bed clothes, enters the galley kitchen, which in total space the apartment is only two room............a bedroom and galley. Niner stands guard atthe main door.
tia-an makes her way to the food replicator........ tia speaks into the machine,one bunch kessel grapes, luskian tea, with cream, coffa black steaming. shecarries the tray to the table..........places the coffa and grapes infront of als-da. first time i have seen the sun shine so clearly in ten years..............aldan rouses. he looks about the room,sees tia-an and smiles......morning tia. she smiles graciously and heavenly..........good morning my husband.
shi-lo stirs and walks into the galley from the bedroom......morning mother...father. tia-an speaks first good morning shi-lo how was your sleep? i tossed and turned all night!shi-lo says with tired words. bows to shi-lo, you should meditae more, it helps....... aldan says also tiredly.
i have made a decision, shi-lo and i will return to corasaunt with you als-da............i want her to have more from life than a thug's whorta, no decent people or trades here, whortas and thugs, and those d**ned sith twins, witches.....they rule this mining colony with doubled iron fists. they will try to stop us.
sith! ergently replied by aldan........get your things together quickly................if they know i'm here and with a droid, it's on..........shi-lo, getdressed..........tia-an tells her in a mother's authoritive voice.
father, you're a jedi master, with a flick of your hand you could wipe them out! it doesn't work that way shi-lo, i wish i could blink and all this corruption would end, and all things to be set right. i cant.............!she responds rudely. some jedi master you are..........! that is the wayit is to be............aldan remarks back!
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 5, 2003 1:16:21 GMT -5
tia-an aldan puts on her wedding tunic, a beige outer tunic, light brown waist wrap, and stoles, a black jedi utility belt, black books similar to als-da's boots, then she pulls her back, which reveals her padawan braid, blue black and red bands from the tip to base of her shull, she pulls her hair back into a singlepony tail which still hangs to her upper thigh.............her pants are a dark cream color... shi-lo enters the bedroom and puts on clothes, her clothes are similar to barris offee.
and pack two bags a peice. they leave the apartment, niner goes ahead of them and prepares the destiny for launch...... on the way to the destiny, not 20 yards from the ship. severeal gamorians, and various other thug species incircle the threein the jedi family!
one gamorian, which has no hands, snorts out orders, and squeals hideiously, the other gamorians begin their attack.
aldan has shi-lo take the saber from the rear belt from him.....she does ...........run to the shi shi-lo run now, the gamorians commence their attack, shi-lo weaves in and out of the on coming mass of pig looking thugs, she makes it to the destiny, niner seals the hatch........tia-an and als-da arenow back to back like fifteen years before the bounty hunter purge.............!
in front of als-da emerges a sith witch, 5'8" tall,weight; 120 lbs.long black knee length hair,silky black.......... eyes are purple, facial features non apparent, she is wearing a mask like the phantom of the opera would wear............she's wearing a long flowing form fitting pruple dress, backless, low cut fron down to her sith belt........slit up the right leg of the dress also to the sith belt.............thigh high boots...........also form fittin onely the right boot is exposed, elbow length purple gloves, golden bracers that match her necklace and ear rings......her saber is a plain not attractive style, has a black blade, with purple aura.............. she stands a few feet from als-da,emerging in front of tia-an, the twin to the first witch.......longer hair,slits up both sides of the dress, to her sith belt revealing her chrome boots,dress completely covers the second witch's body, a oval opening at the cleavage area of the dress, glave are made into the dress itself....purple leggings......saber also a generic clan saber, has the deepest blood red crimson blade.............her saber also already ignited...........without hesitationals-d and tia-an have already ignited their sabers!
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 5, 2003 1:18:29 GMT -5
chapter eight; any loss is to great.....
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Post by ALDAN JII on Jul 5, 2003 2:08:29 GMT -5
a savage battle insues......., all but three gamorians survive this un worthy challenge, the sith witches attck,tia takes the second witch and als-da takes the first witch..................................using a strike als-da hurls the witch backwards, she crashes into some crates, tia-an uses her samurai saber techniquesthe sith withc is un familar with these techniques.............the first witch charges als-da, there sabers colide, she uses two hands and all her strength,he just uses one hand and no strength, he shives her back again...............the second witch figure eights her saber at tia-an, whom deflects and defends each sith strike......................! the senocnd witch use her force strength, and shoves tia to the under level of the landing pad, their saber battle continues , back the als-da and sith witch one...............the first witch bli nd sides als-da by striking him with crates, as he tries to get to his feet, the sith witch ina transitional attack stance, saber in both hands over her hand for a down ward power strike to als-da's neck and head area.............from nowhere a blue saber bladeappears as the black bladed sith saber comes crashing down, the blue saber stops the attack, and als-da without warning, while the sith witch is distracted by shi-lo's defence of her father. als-da aldan gathers his other sabers, and bam simply goes form seven on the sith witch,using a saber in each hand, and one just by the force..............he goes off on the witch, cutting her into several small peices..................a healthy gamorian charges, shi-lo uses the saber her father gave her , and cuts the gamorian from crotch to chin...................as it squeals, an death sigh is heard, als-da realizes tia-an is beneath him somewhere........... he leaps down to help her, shi-lo re-boards the destiny................he sees the the sith witch standing over tia-an's body.............without any facial expressions, or regret he simply destroys the the second witch..........then he turns his sabers off, and replaces them by force, and tends to tia-an.........................he carries her to the destiny.........................and then to his bunk.................! the orange glowing mist appears, and starts to enter tia's wounds............! with tears in his eyes..................she stops him.......! stop!tia-an asks als-da to do......he refuses and continues, she pushes him away, please let me go.......i have nothing left................i have die here a happy and wed woman.................take care of her, she has alot of your qualities als-da, let me go please let me go......please...............!!!!!!??i beg you my husband!!!!!!!!1 als-da croutching on his knees, als-da holds tia-an's body close to him.............!
on corasaunt, yoda feels als-da's pain and grief...........
so much pain,greif there is, a loved one lost...ooooooooooso much pain, and hate, but i fell als-da aldan not accepting these paths to the darkside they lead....apositive is this,,,balance has been gained here.....! he willgiven time to heal upon his arrival.........
shi-lo joins her father,in mourning her mother his bride.........niner shows emotion by just being silent..............aldan vaccu seals tia-an's body to preserve the body until they reach corasaunt,where he can cremate her properly...................!
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