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Post by Jedidragon on Apr 1, 2003 15:38:24 GMT -5
<ooc: I am jedi dragon. I will be helping Xakker with this fanfic. I will do it on tuesdays and he will do it on thursdays>
Prologue: A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...
Episode II:Continue the Quest
After the tragedies around the galaxie have ruined lives, A young boy has come to end it. Xakker Bigzalj, now 17 years, is responsible for Tet Fortuna's death and is now worshipped on many planets. About to be dubbed a Jedi Knight, he shall continue his quest.
Meanwhile, on a distant planet called CAMA TAEDAR, an unknown Jedi is after Xak for also, unknown reasons. Sending hunters out to find him, Xakker feels as though he is in grave danger.
A young scoundrel by the name of PRINCE XIXOR is also after him. He was pronounced dead but has reincarnated as a space enchanter. In other words, almost invincible. Xixor doesn't just want to question him about his friend Tet Fortuna's death, but to kill him. With the help of a few friends, Xak can take down Xixor and the unknown man to obtain peace and wealth to the galaxy...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 3, 2003 18:07:54 GMT -5
Chapter 1:We can do that...
"We can do that" said master Organa. What does that mean? does that mean they would? They should? They could but don't want to? I realy don't know.
"Step in here" said the unkown female. She led me into a room with the 2 droids in there. "You are dirty. You must be cleansed. I will give you a new pair of clothes to put on. Meanwhile, these two droids will be at your service. R2?" "Bleep deet deet bleeep" "Spray the decontaminate and mist on him. 3P0?" "Yes?" "Fetch cleanstone and a warm washcloth" "Yes madam" "Thank you" At that, The 2 droids went immediatelly to work. The Astro droid sprayed this green mist at me. and after a minute or so, sprayed normal mist. "You may know me. My name is Annanae Taquailar." "Hello. I'm Xakker Bigzalj. You can just call ma Xak if you want." "And you can call me Annae. I have been assigned to be your master. I will see if you are truly capable of the works of a Jedi." "I've learned enough." "But not everything." Xakker did not know what she meant. He knew everything about the Jedi. He knew his roots. So why does some 18 year old girl have to tell him? "You must learn to meditate and clear your mind. It is not as easy as it sounds or looks. We can become good friends to."
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 4, 2003 15:46:14 GMT -5
Chapter 2:How now, what news from him?
Prince Xixor was in his tower overlooking the planet. His pet Krayt Dragon was finishing the 3 nerfs plus the Gammorean servant that put the nerfs in. As the 4 carcasses lay there, Xixor's two Rodian bodyguards enter his office. "How now, What news from him?". Leedar, His first guard, presented a box. Geenar replied, "So please my lord, I do return this answer". At that, Leedar opened the parcel and Geenar pulled out the Severed head of Tet Fortuna. "Since 3 years , Like a cloistress, has not walked" said Leedar. "Fools, Why didn't you tell me about this earlier?" "My lord, your planet is so far from the planet of which he fell. Surelly you don't think we can make 28 persects in an hour?" "No, I guess I'm just depressed. Who has done this to him?" "Two jedi. A Human and a Bothan." "What is the name of them?" "The Bothan is dead. But the name of the Human is Xakker Bigzalj." Xixor spent a few minutes thinking. "Thank you. 10 credits for your information. Warn Manaat about him and get any people you can to hunt him down. If he tries to resist, Kill him. Other than that, I want you to bring him here alive. If I see one scratch on him, I WILL FEED YOU TO THE KRAYT DRAGON!"
Meanwhile, on Coruscant, Xak and Annae were meditating in a field. "Clear your mind Xak, and just feel the wind." It was very hard for Xak to clear his mind when he could just look at Annae's beautiful apearance blow in the wind. That realy made Xak want to kiss her. "Don't think that I don't know what you are thinking Xak, You want to kiss me. I would very much like to do the same. But love cannot interfere with the training of a jedi. So for now, Just meditate." It had only been a week since Xak met her and he was already in love with her. And the best thing was that she felt the same about him. She was only a year older than Xak. What would be so wrong with just a little...She kissed him, He kissed back. Little did they know that someone very strong with the force was watching them. Someone very, very far away. What is to become of this?
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 8, 2003 16:00:44 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Cama Taedar
The Chiss Chad Khzatae was watching over Xakker and Annae when in walks his side man Dengar.
"You called me, master?" said Dengar. "Yes" replied Chad. "On the planet of Coruscant, find me the jedi Xakker Bigzalj and the girl he is with". "A young boy? He will never fit in with us! He will only..." "Make things better and easier for you and I." inturrupted Chad. "Find me the boy and the girl and you will get a big reward." Dengar looked confused. "Dead or alive" he asked. "Dengar, you have misunderstood me. I want to have him for help! not food! You can also get help from the Yaka named Toold on Conjarae. He will be a big help." "Yes sir!"
Meannwhile, on Coruscant, Xakker was being very distracted in his training. After the kiss, it was hard to do everything. When Xak went to bed that night, he had a nightmare. He was in a long hallway, almost like the one on the way to the jedi council, but longer. Xak had finally aproached something that looked like a puddle of nerf soliva, but more shiny. He looked at it and saw a man with shoulder-length hair and a beard with blue eyes. He looked like Xakker except for the hair. He smiled and disapeared. But then, Something strange happened. He saw Annae. She looked sad. And then master Skywalker, and master Jade and master Organa, all with a sad look. This made Xak sad. He looked up from the mirror and saw a tall, dark man, reaching out to him. With a shrill voice, it asked for Xak's hand. Xak took out his lightsaber, but the man pulled it with his force pull. "TAKE MY HAND BOY!" and just as Xak did what he said, He woke up, sweating and screaming. It was horrible. "I know what you saw!" said a mysterious, yet familiar voice. TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 10, 2003 18:54:23 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Xakker's Heir
"I know what you saw!" Xakker heard. It was a familiar voice. "Hello?" "Hello Xak. It's me!" "Who?" And at that, A thing that looked like a hologram of a person. But it wasn't. "It's your good friend, Cliff" "Cliff? CLIFF! I am so pleased to see you!" Said an excited Xakker. "Xak, I know what you saw" said a sad Cliff. "Sit back Xak. This is a long story. What you saw in that dream is between you, me and master Skywalker. What you saw was the future. If you are to take the ways of the dark side, It will make all of your friends sad and maybe even kill them. Imagine Annae if you turned to the dark side. Imagine the Ewoks Xak. They would be heartbroken." Xak was confused. "But why did this happen to me of all people?" "I am glad that you asked that. You see, Xak, many years ago, You were related to someone who almost went dark. His name was Obi-Wan Kenobi. He had been betrayed many times by different people." Wow! Just imagine. A few months ago, He was telling the story of his heir to the ewoks. "I will help you on this quest. Continue the Quest, Xakker. Do not give up on it under any circumstances." "Yes, Master Cliff."
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 13, 2003 17:53:08 GMT -5
<New chapters will be added daily>
Chapter 5: Dengar's new bounty
Dengar stepped into THE PUNISHING ONE and launched into space. He was to find Toold on Conjarae. The Yaka were a strong species. But if you had the strongest species on one planet, Toold would double thier strength.
Dengar feared the strength of his new bounty. But Dengar enjoyed the feeling of fear. The little screen right by his seat was blinking which meant he had an incoming transmission. It was from no other but Boba Fett. "Hello, Boba." said Dengar in his sly voice. "What business brings you to my reciever?"
Boba answered: "I am here on coruscant. I will help you to find your new bounty." Dengar was surprised at this. "How do you know about my bounty?" "Well, Dengar, it seems as though there is a lot of Mynocks flying around giving news. It also seems like someone ELSE is after your bounty. Xixor. Xixor assigned me to this job. But I refused. So I payed a little visit to Chad, just to say hi. But he told me that you were after Xakker Bigzalj. But I remembered that Xixor told me about it."
"HA! you call Chad a mynock? I consider him more of an Ixll. He could fill a whole jedi holocron with bounties like Bigzalj. Oh, and before I travel off-subject. Thanks for the information on Xixor. It'll serve a good purpose. How many people are in his army?"
"Well, it's not realy an army. It's more of a band. Six people are with him after Bigzalj. So I'll see you here and we will speak more of this later."
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 14, 2003 16:20:59 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Me? Why would you want me to help?
Manaat was sitting in his large castle when incomes his friend Xixor. "Xixor? How may I help you?"
Xixor gave him an astonished look. "Me? why would you want to help me? I am here to help you!" Manaat was confused. "The Psadan are in deep danger. A powerful jedi is after them!"
Manaat gave Xixor a strange look. Tet had destroyed thier planet and now, someone was after THEM!? "What is the name of this jedi?" asked Manaat.
"Xakker Bigzalj" replied Xixor. "He has a history of bad behavior. He is pouring an overdose of Death-Stick formula into drinks. So be careful of what you are drinking. It could kill you!"
"Don't worry Xixor, I will be. You are dismissed." "Thank you, Manaat!"
At that, Xixor left the room. But later that night, He snuck into Manaat's room and poured five bottles of Death-Stick formula into a cup of Jawar Juice and put it on the Psadan's bedside. By the morning, Manaat was dead. Xixor began to ask himself, "Enchanter? You mean all powerful!"
Meanwhile, on Coruscant, Xakker and Annae are at the Jedi Council. They were angry because they heard about there relationship.
Master Organa was the angriest. "You must understand that Love cannot take over Jedi Training. Annae, you are expelled from the jedi council, but you are still a jedi. Xak, I shall assign you a new master. Coomar? You will be his new master."
So Coomar was his name. The fifth jedi of the council. "You are dismissed." said master Jade. Why did the worst possible thing have to happen? Now I can never see Annae again.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 15, 2003 16:14:53 GMT -5
<Tomorrow, I will have a recap of what has happened so people can start reading it in the middle.> Chapter 7:FINE! I WILL JOIN!
Coomer was strict, but nice when not trying to train me. He was a young man, 18 years old. He looked a lot like Annae, except for the male part. He very much reminded me of Annae.
"Where did your last master leave you at?" asked Coomer.
"We did not get very far." I replied. "She was just starting to tell me about lightsaber techniques."
"Well, I guess we can continue where she left off." At that, he flung out his orange lightsaber. ORANGE! Orange and red lightsabers are a sign of the dark side. He started laughing an evil and sort of sly laugh. He pushed me up against the cold wall and mumbled a bit. He started to speak a bit more clearer. "Join me, Xakker. Together, we can be all powerful!"
"WHO ARE YOU!" I yelled. He started doing that evil laugh again. He started to change with a burst of light. He changed into a Chiss. "I am not the Jedi Coomer. I have been disguised as him ever since I told the Jedi Council about you and Coomer's twin sister!" Well this surely explained a lot.
"WHAT!" A strong wind started blowing towards me.
"Don't you see! I have captured your love and her brother! So you can join me and they stay alive, or you can vetoize this offer, and they will DIE!!"
What a traditional offer! It did not take me awhile to decide. "FINE! I WILL JOIN!"
"Very good choice Xakker." At that, the wind stopped blowing. "Come to my ship, and we will go to Cama Taedar to let your friends go." Wait, THE DREAM! I just thoght of it. Everyone will be sad now. After I have saved the galaxy, I have destroyed all that it has done to me!
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 16, 2003 16:09:28 GMT -5
Recap of The Tale of Xakker-Continue the Quest (Just in case you never read them and want to start)
THE TALE OF XAKKER Synopsis Xakker was o the planet of ryloth when his illegal jedi leader, Tet Fortuna, betrayed him and told him to go to Kashyyyk. But Xakker crash landed on Endor where he became friends with the Ewoks and thier master, Cliff.
When Tet and his stormtroopers destroyed planets, they far ahead of scheduale. So they decided to go and destroy Endor. Little did they know, that they were in for a BIG surprise.
When they landed, Xak and the Ewoks faught back with the stormtroopers. Tet took Cliff hostage. Xak and Cliff faught back at Tet. Little did Xak know that Cliff was a jedi. Tet had killed Cliff. In Xak's anger, he killed Tet and became a hero.
He gave one of his lightsabers to one of the Ewoks. "You will be a substitute master, until I return." At that, Xak left Endor and headed to coruscant to be dubbed a jedi knight.
CONTINUE THE QUEST Synopsis: When Xak arrived, he met up with two droids, C-3P0 and R2-D2. They brought him to the jedi council. They accepted Xak, to a master. Her name was Annae. Sh was Xakker's age. Sh gave Xak a dormatory in the Jedi Tower.
On another planet, the Enchanter Xixor was just hearing about his friend Tet's . He sent two rodian guards to hunt down Xakker for this.
Meanwhile, on Coruscant, Xakker and Annae are in love. Chad, a very strong, dark jedi, saw Xak and Annae kiss. He then told a bounty hunter that he knew, Dengar, to find Xakker and bring him to him.
Xak has a dream that night that shows that something bad will happen to him. Someone will urge him to join the dark side. He also learns about a distant relative, Obi-Wan Kenobi.
Dngar meets up with his friend, Boba Fett. Boba knew about Xak from his own sources. He volunteered to help Dengar to find him. Later on that day, Xak was found, but not caught.
The Jedi council learns about Xak and Annae's love relationship. Love shall not take over Jedi arts. Xak is assigned a new master and Annae is thrown out of the Jedi Council.
One day, when Xak is practicing with his new master, He learns that he is a changling named Chad. Chad is the one that is spoken about in the dream. But Xak is clueless that the whole dream ever happened. Chad was the one that told the jedi council about Xak and Annae, in the face of the Jedi Master, of course. Xak is given two choices. 1. Stay with the jedi, and Annae will die, or 2. Join the dark side, and Annae will be spared. Xak's choice is not so obvious. Due to his love to Annae, Xakker chooses the dark side of the force...TO BE CONTINUED.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 17, 2003 14:42:57 GMT -5
Chapter 8: The Biggest Mistake I ever made.
The biggest mistake I ever made was not turning to the dark side, It was puting shame to the name of JEDI. It was the worst feeling, I should have faught back. But yet, I had a good feeling in my soul. I was to be rewarded for my doings. I don't know what it would be. But it would be good.
When we arrived at Cama Taedar, Chad braught me to a holding cell. Inside was a sad and lonely Annae.
"Ok, Xak. Here is your reward. You may now kill this girl." I don't know why, but I was more than willing to take this reward. I flung out my blue lightsaber. "Foolish boy" said Chad. "You know the colors of the dark side are not blue." At that, I gave my lightsaber to Chad and it burst into flames. He then opened his jacket to reveal many lightsabers. "Make your choice, Xak. Any one of them." How was I to choose? there was double helixes, double rogues, single rogues and countless other types. I made my choice. It was a single lightsaber that kind of looked like rope. "Excelent choice, Xak. You have chosen the strongest saber I have. An orange single spiral." Indeed, it was. When I activated it, it started shaking, as it should. "Now Xak, Kill her. She will be the test subject for your new lightsaber." Annae started crying. I had no sympathy any more.
"Please don't do it, Xak" said a crying Annae. "Think of all of the people you love!" "Do it Xak!" I was thinking of what I should do. If I didn't do it, I would not be loyal. But if I did, I would only be rewarded. "Xak, I love you!" That only made it more difficult. "DO IT XAK!" "NOOO!" Wait a minute, I would only be rewarded. I said the first things that came to mind: "I must follow my master's rule." And so I did.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 18, 2003 13:35:46 GMT -5
Chapter 9: Tables are Turning
When that lightsaber went through her lower torso, I suddenly felt another presence. It was Master Skywalker. "Xak! Do not let the dark side take over you! It will only make things worse!" Yelled Master Skywalker.
"Do not listen to him Xak. He is one of them!" Said Chad while pointing at Annae's struggling body. Annae was clearly still alive, but just barely. But could I think more of this saying than it actually meant? My anger suddenly slowed down. I felt a comforting warmth inside of me. He is one of them. That meant that Master Skywalker was one of the people that loved me. Skywalker opened up his coat and revealed two lightsabers.
"You are right, Chad." I said. "He is one of them." I then took the lightsaber he gave me and stomped on it. He got very angry and flung out his lightsaber. I force-pulled one of the lightsabers from Skywalker's hand. He then went over to assist Annae.
"I shall kill you, then" said Chad. We had started fighting when a big, huge ship landed. When it landed, A Falleen came out followed by two rodians. "I believe that this belongs to me?" Said the Falleen with a gesturing hand to me.
"I do not belong to anyone" I said. "I am no ones property but my own"....
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 19, 2003 13:06:16 GMT -5
Chapter 10: The Beginning of the end is near.
"I am no ones property!" I yelled. "I am to travel with no one but the ones I love!" Annae then found her balance. "Annae!" I ran over to her "Annae! I'm so sorry. I don't know what I was thinking! I'm so sorry!"
Annae was more alive than ever. "I love you!" we then kissed for a moment.
"You have sold your soul to the jedi, Xak." said Chad. "You are no longer my property. I will help you to continue your quest."
"You are wrong!" said the falleen coming out of the ship. "He belongs to me." "WHAT HAS HE BEEN CLEARLY SAYING, XIXOR!" "He is mine!" "HE IS THE PROPERTY OF HIS OWN!" "YOU ARE WRONG!"
The falleen named Xixor then started glowing while Chad took out his lightsaber. Xixor then launched some sort of energy from his hands while Chad parried it with his lightsaber. Another bolt of energy, another parry until Xixor got fed up and just dove at Chad. "WHY ARE YOU ATTACKING ME WHEN YOU ARE JUST TRYING TO KILL THE BOY?!" asked Chad. Xixor was unaware that Annae, Skywalker and I were already gone. Our ship was right above them. We opened the door beneath the ship so Chad could hop in. While he struggled to get in, Xixor blasted a large bolt of energy at Chad and hit him. We pulled Chad's body into the ship. "CHAD!" I yelled. "Annae, bring him to a maintenance droid on the ship." "Certainly." Annae and master Skywalker picked up the Chiss's body and put him on a bed. Meanwhile, I walked into the thingypit with R2. "Boy, Artoo, I never would have known that just a little kiss would lead all the way up to what happened just now." Artoo just kind of looked at me for a second. "Now don't give me that look, Artoo" We then started laughing. I never knew I could laugh in such a depressing time. "Hey, Artoo?" "Beep beep BLEeep deet deet?" "Do you think that you could pilot the ship for awhile?" "bleeEP deet deet" "Thanks." I went in the back to check up on Chad. Proabably not only to do that, but to see Annae. "Is he alright?" I asked. "Yes, he will be." replied Master Skywalker. "Where are we headed?" asked Master Skywalker. "Coruscant." I replied. "Umm, Annae? Could I see you for a minute?" "Sure." When we made it to the spot with the window, we got into small conversation. "Annae, I...I just...I just wanted to..." "Don't even bother, Xak. I know what you want to say." We then kissed by the window when Master Skywalker walked by with a damaged, but alive Chad.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Apr 21, 2003 11:23:05 GMT -5
The End. (The following is a preview to the third installment of The Tale of Xakker. It will be called "Friends of the Galaxy") Friends of the Galaxy: Sneak Preview As the ship made it's way to Coruscant, Xakker remembered one thing, The Ewoks. The Ewoks needed to be visited. "R2, land on Coruscant. We will only be there for a short while. I will get my mark, my supplies and we will pay a short visit to the Forest Moon of Endor" "Bleep deed deet bleet." "Thank you R2" To continue reading this story, or post revues and comments of it, go to xakker.proboards13.com The new Xakker will take place this wednesday.
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