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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Feb 18, 2003 15:57:37 GMT -5
<Every Tuesday, a new chapter will be in this thread> Prologue: A long time ago in a galaxy far far away lived a human boy named Xakker. Xak was at the age where he could make his own decisions. 14. He was living amongst the twi'lek on ryloth. He was illegally being trained to be a jedi. He was also old enough to hold a lightsaber. He was given a blue rogue by his twi'lek master Qunlar Tet-Fortuna. Bib Fortuna's son. The Twi'lek treated Xak very well only because he was the only human on the planet. But he resisted the prejuduceness of the annoying children. Soon enough, Xakker will be old enough to see the jedi council to dub him a jedi knight and obtain peace and love in the galaxy...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Feb 25, 2003 16:06:33 GMT -5
Chapter 1:It's just Betrayal, Young padawan.
Xakker was trying out his lightsaber when he realized, Tet's name was carved on it. Xak got excited. So he got a bernnstone and carved his name on the lightsaber. XAKKER BIGZALJ it said in red burning letters right under Tet's name. Xakker then saw Tet running at him with a yellow, DOUBLE BLADED lightsaber. He pushed me against a tree and said, "Xak, they are after you! They are after all of us!!". I seemed a bit confused. "Who?" I said. At that, two stormtroopers stepped out from behind Tet's back. Tet began to laugh. What is going on? I asked myself. The stormtroopers then cuffed me and unarmed me. "Camana Sqaeto" said Tet to the Stormtroopers. This meant "Keep Weapons" in Ryn. "Den Carto, hett Jaedi en lunarblaide". This meant "Be careful, he is a jedi with a lightsaber". "Traitor" I said. Tet then spoke to me in a very evil voice. "It's just Betrayal, young padawan. You are to be taken to Kashyyyk, home of the wookiee. They will decide you fate. TAKAE MUSHQANTO!! (take him away)"
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 4, 2003 15:38:32 GMT -5
<Additions will now also be added on fridays, so thats TWICE a week to read> Chapter 3:This is Kashyyyk?
I was worried, I was now on the ship, The stormtroopers had me in an energy cell in there ship. They were communicating in some sort of huttese language. I also realized that the ship was on auto-pilot in space. I didn't know if this was dangerous or not because we were going through an asteroid field. I was now worried, the Twi'lek stormtroopers were now not speaking and looking kind of dazed. At that, the ship just rimmed an asteroid and made a creaking noise. At that, the first stormtrooper awoke and tried to wake up the other. He was not aware that he was in an asteroid field. He then was knocked out once again. after a while, with the stormtroopers STILL asleep, the power pack on the energy cell was starting to ware off. I was happy because the shocks stopped working and turned off. I then got out, got the stormtroopers and their spare power pack, put them in the cell, turned on the power pack and THEY were now trapped. I was at the wheel for another long time when both of the stormtoopers awoke, I then realized, I FORGOT TO UNARM THEM!! It took them awhile to realize that they were in the cell. But then I remembered that my lightsaber was at the steering pad of the ship. The stormtroopers started shooting at me and I parried their fire. One was shot but the other was very alive. It then fell to the ground like a narkulept. I then realized, it wasn't dead. It took a shot at the steering pad. I could no longer steer, IN THE MIDDLE OF AN ASTEROID FIELD!!!!! the ship was curbing and cracking when I suddenly got knocked out.
When I awoke, I was on a grassy planet. I could only think, "This is Kashyyyk? This peaceful planet?". I started to roam around on my own when I heard a little chirp. I looked around to see what it was, "Hello?" no answer. I heard it again, "Is anyone there?" no answer. I then kept hearing chirps all over the place getting louder, longer, fast until...WWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! A small, fury creature was flying my way on a vine and started attacking me. "STOP! I COME IN PEACE!!" I tried to tell the creature, over and over again until I couldn't help myself, I flung out my lightsaber, WWWOOOWWW!!! the creature flung itself back. More of these creatures then appeared from behind bushes, trees and everywhere. Big groups of them came and attacked me. One even got hold of my lightsaber and it turned off. They then started pulling me along.
After awhile, they brought me to a cave. Very far in the cave. I was brought to a creature so foul, but somehow, these creatures worshipped him. It was a Bothan. One of the creatures approached him and started speaking in that chirping again. The Bothan then spoke, "The ewoks would like to know who you are.". Ewoks? these were the ewoks I had heard so much about? I knew where I was now. The Forest moon of Endor. "I am jedi knight Xakker Bigzalj". I knew that I was not a jedi knight but what was I supposed to say. The Bothan then told the ewok what I had said. The ewok then told the other ewoks. They replied with OOOOOOOOOO!. The leader ewok then asked the bothan a question. "Why are you here on Endor?" the bothan asked. "I realy do not know. I was on my way to Kashyyyk when my ship crashed and I am stuck here. If you can help me out, I will be most greatful and help you in return until I can send a transmission to a help source on the planet of Coruscant." The bothan then told the head ewok what I had said. It asked the bothan another. "What planet will you send the transmission to?" "Coruscant" "Coruscant resides on the inner rim." "What's your point?" "Our transmission recievers can only go to planets on the outer rim because WE are on the outer rim." It was a fact, I was lost. "Your ship has cost us a great deal of protection" the bothan said, "The ewoks thought it was an attack, but we will be will ing to help you with whatever you need. We will give you shelter, clothing, food and any other needed necessities. And for your sake, I have not introduced myself, I am Cliff Dansten. I serve as a master to the ewoks." "And I believe I have already introduced my self. I am Xak Bigzalj and I am eternally greatful of your warm welcoming." It was official, I was here to stay. Endor was to be my NEW home.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 7, 2003 15:08:10 GMT -5
Ladies and gentlemen of the jedi assembly. My apologie. I know i said i would start adding to the fanfic on fridays also. But it won't start until next week. As my apologie. I will do one on monday along with tuesday and friday. Thank you
Xakker
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 10, 2003 17:47:34 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Tet's plan of attack
Xak was now amongst the ewoks. They taught him to hunt, fish, fight, wrestle (though he was much to big for the ewoks) and many more things. Xak was now able to understand their emotions without even hearing them speak. Like one time, a little ewok, Wicket W. Warrick went up to him. Though he was not crying, Wicket tried speaking to him. Xak could tell, just by his tone, that he was sad. He had lost his pet bog worm. Wicket and the bog worm were like best friends. It was rather sad.
Meanwhile, on Ryloth, Tet was still thinking that Xakker was dead. He had destroyed the whole planet population other than a few handymen. If they did not join with him, he would cut off their lekku(s) and leave them to bleed. And if they did not die, he would burn them. Tet had a whole army of handymen. They had black, green or red stormtrooper armor depending on their rank. Black being HONORS MEMBER, green meaning MEDIOCRE MEMBER and red meaning LOWEST FORM. The red were usually left to flying ships. The green were mostly for small armies and black was usually the leader of small armies. Their was about 10 black (including Tet), 100 green and 20 red. Each small army, That left each band with 10 members, 1 leader and 2 pilots. Tet's band was the strongest. They had the strongest ship, strongest band and it had TET in it! Tet's army had members named Deel, Firith, Koyi, Tott and many others. Those were the 4 that always stuck with Tet. They were going to attack the Rimma Trade Route. Planets starting at Abregado-Rae, Fondor, Thyferra, Yag'Dhul, Sullust, Eriadu, Clak'dor VII, Sluis Van and ending with Dagobah.
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 11, 2003 16:15:04 GMT -5
chapter 5: Rimma Trade Route Status:Complete
Tet had just destroyed almost all of the Rimma Trade Route. All of the other planets were also destroyed. 19/29 of the route planets were destroyed. The Corellian Trade Route was only half way, The Hydian Way only had 4 more planets to go, The Correlian Run only had 3 planets out, The Perlemian Trade Route didn't have much more to go and the Rimma Trade Route (Tet's route) only had 1 planet to go...Dagobah.
Tet and his gang landed on the planet. They saw that there was not that many lifeforms on the planet except for a few birds and worms. "This shouldn't be to hard" said Tott. "True, but there is something familiar about this place" said Tet. He thought for a second, "Tott, Firith, you come with me. Deel, Koyi, guard the ship".
After about an hour, Tet and the other two had placed detonators all over the small planet. They went back to the ship and flew away. Tet had simply just pressed a button and the whole planet was destroyed.
The monitor started to speak. "Rimma Trade Route Status:Complete". Tet was very happy with this and hoped for more. "Deel, turn left. Let us destroy the forest moon of Endor...TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 14, 2003 16:10:38 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Tet?
Xak was telling the ewoks the tale of the jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi with Cliff translating it. They were very excited and upbeat about this story. Especially the children. When Xak got to the part where he battled and killed the sith Darth Maul, that was the most tensefull part. When the story ended with him being killed by Darth Vader, The ewoks were sad.
But then, one of the ewoks started chirping and pointing at the sky. Cliff said, "It's another ship! TAKE COVER!".
A few minutes later, the ship landed. out walked a black stormtrooper followed by 4 blue ones. The black one aproached Cliff. "W...w..welcome". At that, The Stormtrooper took off his helmet followed by the other 4. I recognized this green twi'lek. With the scar on his face, it would almost look like..."Tet?". "Xak? What are you doing on endor? I sent you to die on kashyyyk! why are you here?" "I could ask you the exact same question" "Not for long though" Cliff then joined in. "What do you mean?". "I'm hear to take your planet old man". "KAMANAIWUH!!!!!!!" said Cliff, and at that, all of the ewoks started attacking from thier spots by shooting arrows, throwing rocks, throwing staffs etc. Tet then ran to the side and started speaking into a com link. "CAMINEAEH TODORO TROOPERSTOURS! (BRING MORE STORMTROOPERS!)". Endor was at war...TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 18, 2003 15:24:36 GMT -5
Chapter 7:You can take our planet Tet, but you can't take us!
Endor was at war. After a few hours of intense battle, more ships landed and all of the black, green, blue and red stormtroopers were in the battle. They were in the advantage but just barely. The ewoks eventually got away to hide and the stormtroopers were clueless. A band of stormtroopers fell into a trap and another group was not trapped but humiliated. They tried to take a group of ewoks but the ewoks managed to run and a buch of other ewoks smacked them with a tree trunk atached to ropes.
After a while, Tet and his group found us. But did not attack. "It's all over Xak. Spare your life or we will do it for you!". "No thank you Tet. We are all family. But you can't kill all of us. You can take our planet Tet. But you can't take us!"
"SO BE IT! CHAINUUUU!!! (ATTACK!!!)" TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 21, 2003 14:14:00 GMT -5
Chapter 8: face to face with Tet
The stormtroopers were highly in the advantage now. The ewoks were almost all taken hostage. All of the ewoks were in handcuffs. I heared a groaning far away. I snuck away from the stormtroopers. I saw a small building. It was heavily guarded. The stormtroopers that were guarding removed their helmets and started puffing death sticks. But it looked as though it was an illegal type. It was green with blue smoke. I KNOW! The main ingredient in death sticks are the common ixitall planet. But these death sticks were stuffed up with a dangerous neurospice. I forget the name. But I had to figure out where that groaning was coming from. I jumped out and knocked the stormtroopers cold. I went inside the building. It was dark with a few elevators. I stepped into one. By coincidence, It was Tet. The screaming was coming from the area in front of him. If Tet would just step out of the way I would be able to see who it was. "Care to join us?" I heard Tet say. He was talking to me. So I stepped out.
"I suppose you would like to see who this is." Tet stepped away...It was Cliff. He was weak and was being shocked. He slowly regained consciousness. "He is being punished for not joining us. So are all of the ewoks. They will be sent to Tanquar the Hutt to be taken as slaves. They should be worth a precious bit." I saw Tet reaching for his lightsaber so I slowly reached for mine. Luckily he didn't see me. "XAKKER! HE'S GOT A LIGHSABER!" At that I jerked mine off of my belt and cut Cliff out of the strech. By my surprise, he had a lightsaber to. A green helix. But it was nothing to Tet's yellow Double-Helix. Cliff was very strong to the force.
After a while of intense battle. Tet force threw me back. I was down. It was between Cliff and Tet. I threw Cliff my lightsaber so he had two. But by the time he caught it, The fight was over. Cliff was stabbed through the middle. I was in rage. I got up. Force grabbed the two lightsabers. I cut Tet's lightsaber in half. sliced off his hand and off with his head. Tet was dead.
"Cliff?" I couldn't help. "Cliff?" I walked over to him. "Xak, come." said Cliff in his weak, dying voice. "Xak, you have saved the galaxy. You have saved us" "Don't leave me Cliff!" "G...g...goodbye...Xak." at that, Tet was dead. My saga had come to an end. I saved the planet!
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 21, 2003 16:22:34 GMT -5
Chapter 9: On my own
Xakker was on his own now. But the battle on Endor was over. Xak had saved the entire galaxy now that Tet was gone. The stormtroopers were no longer. They all were back to normal now. All of the ships were gone now except for 1. Tet's ship. I felt guilty that I should just leave it there. But then I could go to the jedi council and ask to be a jedi. But, then I would have to leave my family.
I decided that I should just go. I said goodbye to the ewoks. I could now understand them. They were trying to tell me that I was there master.
"I'm sorry. But I must go. It's been a pleasure living with you all." One of the ewoks started crying. "There, There. I will return someday. I promise." I gave him my rogueas now, I had Cliff's helix. "Take this as a sign of love and power. You will take my place as leader while I am gone. Take care of the others as best as you can. I will return. I promise."
At that. I was off. Life seems so easy when flying through space. You have almost nothing to worry about. Especially on the route to coruscant. The force is always with you.
I was on a landing platform. I picked up subspeeder and asked to go to the jedi council. I was there in a flash. I paid 10 credits to the Rodian driving the subspeeder and walked into the building. It was very quiet. I started walking down a long hallway. A blast door opened. As I walked through another hallway with many tips and turns, I saw an escort droid. "OH! hello! I am C-3P0, human cyborg relations. And I do not know where he is now but I will be more than happy to introduce you to my counterpart R2-D2. When I find him. How may I serve you sir?" "Could you tell me where I can find the jedi council?" "Yes, come this way!" I followed the droid to another blast door. "Blast, where is R2 when you need him most. You must forgive me sir. We will have a bit of a..." "beep bleep dee deet" "R2! where have you been! Oh, sorry sir. This is my counterpart I have been telling you about. R2-D2. You'll have to forgive him sir. He's always getting into trouble like this" "Just open the door, please?" "Yes sir. R2?" "Bleep Deet" At that, the little astro droid put a pointer into a little slot and started spinning it. The blast door opened. "This way, please?" I followed the 2 droids into a big, round, white room with 5 jedi sitting in chairs. I knew who some of them were. The leading member was Luke Skywalker. To his right was his sister Leia Organa Solo. To his left was his wife Mara Jade Skywalker. I did not know who the other 2 were. "Welcome to the jedi council" said Master Skywalker "Such a pleasure to see you alive" said Master Jade I didn't know how they knew but I forgot I was surrounded by some of the most powerful jedi in the world. "I come to..." "...be dubbed a jedi knight?" said Master Organa "Yes" I said with a mouthful of relief "We can do that"
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Post by Xak Bigzalj on Mar 26, 2003 14:14:31 GMT -5
Visit here next Tuesday for the Sequel to "The Tale of Xakker" called "Xakker, Continue the Quest". It will be about Xak returning to his Jedi Ways after he is dubbed a Jedi Knight. Thank you for reading, "The Tale of Xakker" and I hope for you to read "Xakker, Continue the Journey"
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