Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Apr 4, 2003 22:29:39 GMT -5
Uh oh, now both padawans are dead! So it's drawing near the end, is it? It'll be interesting to see what happens;D!!!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 5, 2003 0:49:52 GMT -5
I should have this story completed by tomorrow. You're still in for quite a loop, Tek!
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Schph Gochi
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"traveling through hyperspace ain't like dustin' crops boy"
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Post by Schph Gochi on Apr 5, 2003 7:16:02 GMT -5
wow......
can't wait for the "big finish"!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 6, 2003 4:16:02 GMT -5
The last three chapters are posted. Now...it is finished! ;D
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Apr 6, 2003 9:15:23 GMT -5
Wow! I didn't expect THAT;D! I was certain he was going to kill his sister. I'm glad he didn't, though.
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Apr 6, 2003 12:04:44 GMT -5
Wow Drehlon....didn't see that one coming! Powerfull ending, that's for sure.... Standing to applaude......
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 6, 2003 13:58:51 GMT -5
Thanks, guys. I may try another one soon.
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Apr 6, 2003 15:58:52 GMT -5
You could wright a sequel to The Betrayal of The Sith:D! :::Puts on pouting face:: I wanna know what happens to Kylaan!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 6, 2003 17:39:28 GMT -5
That is my plan!
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Apr 6, 2003 18:00:22 GMT -5
::jumps up and down:: Yay:D! We'll get to now if Kylaan actually goes to the dark side!
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Apr 7, 2003 5:15:18 GMT -5
::jumps up and down:: Yay:D! We'll get to now if Kylaan actually goes to the dark side! Or he may rise to become one of the greatest of the lightside Jedi...
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 7, 2003 11:56:00 GMT -5
Through the coming week, I'll start laying it out on paper. Perhaps fairly soon, we'll know what becomes of Kylaan.
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Toba Qaf
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Post by Toba Qaf on Apr 7, 2003 13:12:04 GMT -5
I love your writing, Drehlon! That last bit with Kylaan and his sister was so suspenseful!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Apr 9, 2003 15:32:22 GMT -5
Cool, Toba. I'm glad ya liked it.
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Kesshi
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Post by Kesshi on Apr 10, 2003 12:07:36 GMT -5
I'm realy back into the writing mod now, soon the next chapter will be up, and after that I'll become a writing mater. Anyway what dose everyone think of my story, i realy need to know. Also is Kesshi's ego visable( I is real soppust to grow as the stroy flows)<< I like the rythm to takeLOL
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