Toba Qaf
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Post by Toba Qaf on Mar 10, 2003 8:37:48 GMT -5
Go Ryss! Your story is great! We want more, Schph!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 22, 2003 12:05:11 GMT -5
Whoa! We've got some real talent in here! All of your stories are outstanding. I'm just getting started with one. Actually, it was written as a script for a fanfilm, but I scrapped that idea. Anyway, I'm expanding it greatly to make a short story that I can share with all here.
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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Mar 22, 2003 16:05:26 GMT -5
Another update to my story. Let me know what you think!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 22, 2003 20:42:56 GMT -5
Will do.
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Mar 23, 2003 20:32:28 GMT -5
I just read your adition Ryss, I think it's really great:D!!
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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Mar 23, 2003 20:56:14 GMT -5
It's kinda interesting, seeing as I'm currently writing from a small child's point of view. Does that feeling come across to you, or does it seem more like someone older is the person experiencing the story?
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Mar 23, 2003 21:07:47 GMT -5
Whenever I read a well written book it makes me feel like the main character, no matter how old. Your story is that way;D.
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 24, 2003 0:48:57 GMT -5
I have the first chapter of my story "Betrayal of the Sith" posted. Let me know what you think!
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Mar 24, 2003 6:41:32 GMT -5
Whoa!.....Drehlon....I am hooked!
And Ryss....perfect ....I see your story through a child's eyes!
WOW to all of our writers........ ;D
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Naibek Retnuh
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Post by Naibek Retnuh on Mar 24, 2003 9:59:23 GMT -5
Wow Drehlon! You hooked me too:D!
Schph, I can't wait to find out what happen's next;D!
It's amazing to find out how many GREAT writers are on here.
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 24, 2003 15:12:34 GMT -5
Excellent story, Ryss!
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 24, 2003 16:07:25 GMT -5
I got Chap. II up for whoever wants to read it.
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Toba Qaf
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Post by Toba Qaf on Mar 24, 2003 16:29:59 GMT -5
Go Drehlon! More !
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Mar 25, 2003 6:49:12 GMT -5
Loving it Drehlon..... and am taking notes... love the way you handle descriptions and dialogue...... areas that I need to work on....
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Drehlon
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Post by Drehlon on Mar 25, 2003 18:22:20 GMT -5
Thanks for your input.....Chap III is up.
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