Solinbeb Newau
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There are many ways to learn the ways of the Force, but only those who have joined it may know best.
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Post by Solinbeb Newau on Aug 25, 2005 9:21:59 GMT -5
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Post by ayanabashu on Aug 26, 2005 23:01:24 GMT -5
A Cry in the Dark---My fav characters, Qui-Gon and Obi! Love the way you end your excerpts with a "teaser"... kind of a "cliffhanger"! Qui and Obi are my favorites also. It's alot of fun to get into Qui's head, especially since he "sees" the Force like I do. We just don't always interpret it the same, which makes the plot bunnies run wild. You know what they say about wild hairs ... er ... hares. ;D Updates will be rather sporatic now that classes have started, but I'll post updates as soon as they're ready.
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Solinbeb Newau
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There are many ways to learn the ways of the Force, but only those who have joined it may know best.
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Post by Solinbeb Newau on Sept 12, 2005 8:40:06 GMT -5
Ok, guess no one has any comments about New Horizons then...
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Schph Gochi
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"traveling through hyperspace ain't like dustin' crops boy"
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Post by Schph Gochi on Sept 16, 2005 9:57:05 GMT -5
I am waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay behind on my reading..... and writing......
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Post by Leda EmBorr on Sept 20, 2005 0:49:30 GMT -5
Yeah, me too... I read when I can... and time seems to be getting scarcer!
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Post by Farra Sti on Sept 23, 2005 17:10:24 GMT -5
Are there any comments for my fic Destined? I put a link to where I have it up.
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Post by Ani-Chay Pinn on Oct 2, 2005 22:48:14 GMT -5
Comments for stories are really, really tricky. When someone asks for comments about a story, I never know what they really want. Spelling and grammar corrections? Suggestions for improving the plot/dialogue/storyline? Accuracy check with the fan universe being written in? Are they looking to revise/rewrite the story with improvements? Critiical dissection of the work as is? Serious criticism I save for only in-person interactions; there's too much chance of being misunderstood in text alone.
Comments can also can be really, really rare. I learned that years ago from writing for print fanzines (before there was an internet) that reader comments are far and few between. The writing has to be worth it for it's own sake and for pure personal satisfaction without any outside responses, because more often than not, they won't be coming.<sigh> Often the only person you would get feedback from would be the editor. Otherwise any responses would be a few nice words if they like it and most often no response at all whether or not they liked it, or even read it -- getting people to just read fiction is the most common problem it seems.
I think that writing is one of those inherently light-side activities that is good for the writer whether anyone else reads it or not. You always get something out of it.
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Post by Starkindler (The Naked Jedi) on Oct 11, 2005 23:07:17 GMT -5
Personally I like the feedback on storyline, plot, development, etc. on stuff I write. Working on one now...looks like it'll be a long one if I can finish it. It involves my character and a time between EPIII and ANH.
Ani-Chay: Very good stuff you put up! Feel like I shouldn't be so eager to put mine along side it. keep it going!!
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Andle Di-Ranos
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YOU HAVE DONE THAT YOURSELF! - Obi-Wan E3
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Post by Andle Di-Ranos on Oct 12, 2005 18:10:19 GMT -5
Has anyone had any comments on star wars the fallen tale? im looking for improvements and trying to make sure ive gotton everything right.(hard to right a story that takes place at the beginning of the republic.
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Post by tailonkae on Oct 12, 2005 19:07:11 GMT -5
Any comments on the story " TJA in the Clone Wars" tell me what you all think of it..
MTFBWY
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Post by Ky-Wan Zann on Dec 18, 2005 5:08:18 GMT -5
I just look for people enjoying it if they read it when it comes to comments, I'm gonna try to read and write more in the new year.
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Schph Gochi
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"traveling through hyperspace ain't like dustin' crops boy"
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Post by Schph Gochi on Dec 18, 2005 10:16:49 GMT -5
I just look for people enjoying it if they read it when it comes to comments, I'm gonna try to read and write more in the new year. ditto....
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Jan 21, 2006 1:00:40 GMT -5
Could some of you guys read my story so far? I know that theres spelling and grammer errors.. but Im not going to fix that till later..
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Post by Ani-Chay Pinn on Feb 4, 2006 21:29:41 GMT -5
I must admit that I have moved my fanfiction activities to theforce.net's fanfiction forums, so I haven't been looking in the fanfic area here much. There's a lot more feedback there.
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Feb 4, 2006 21:48:20 GMT -5
Thanks
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