Schph Gochi
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"traveling through hyperspace ain't like dustin' crops boy"
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Post by Schph Gochi on Jul 13, 2005 7:13:46 GMT -5
A brief installment.....but an installment none the less....
;D
and Lazlo....I have begun to read yours and find it very interesting.....
and....very good....
and....if it helps to funnel your feelings into the story...that seems to be a good idea.....I hope that it helps....
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Post by lazlototh on Jul 13, 2005 16:14:21 GMT -5
A brief installment.....but an installment none the less.... ;D and Lazlo....I have begun to read yours and find it very interesting..... and....very good.... and....if it helps to funnel your feelings into the story...that seems to be a good idea.....I hope that it helps.... We'll see - no guarantees - I feel rather odd doing it |
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Schph Gochi
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"traveling through hyperspace ain't like dustin' crops boy"
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Post by Schph Gochi on Jul 13, 2005 16:54:35 GMT -5
Odd? Around here?  |
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Post by Ani-Chay Pinn on Jul 13, 2005 19:27:24 GMT -5
Odd is a relative term when everyone in the room in dressed as a Jedi.
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Post by lazlototh on Jul 14, 2005 1:31:23 GMT -5
Maybe I'm not feeling very Jedi -
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Post by Eril Nadon on Aug 3, 2005 20:52:13 GMT -5
Wow! hey guys lol. I haven't been around here in awhile, sorry, been busy with life. But I did post more of my story, which I have yet to finish, it's called Shadows of Light. It would really mean a lot to me if some of you could check it out.  Thanks a ton! ;D |
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Aug 8, 2005 7:32:13 GMT -5
I need comments on Enemy's Path. I have the first chapter up. I am editing 7 other chapters so there is more to come.
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Post by Cara Drume on Aug 15, 2005 9:15:17 GMT -5
Hey, guys!
I've finally posted a story! It's the one called 'Scrat Wars'. Weird title, but it's kind of a crossover story between Star Wars and Ice Age.
It's about Luke hiking through Yavin Four while trying to find the old Massassi Temple. Then he runs into Scrat...you know, that little thing from Ice Age that looks like a saber-toothed squirrel?
Hope you read it!
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Xzandar Vannlo
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"Is this what you call a Diplomatic Solution?" "No this is what I call Aggresive Nagotiatins"
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Post by Xzandar Vannlo on Aug 15, 2005 19:20:17 GMT -5
That's awesome TheUndercoverJedi I'll defiantly check it out and let you know what I think of it.
Oh yeah I would just like to share that I plan to make a 3 to 6 book sires on this site (when I can figure out all the names) in addition to finishing that Biography on Drake Vannlo.
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Post by Ky-Wan Zann on Aug 17, 2005 1:02:51 GMT -5
Hey all,
I finally posted a stroy mind it I wrote it years ago and my character is only like 12 or 13 but it would mean alot if I could get some feedback as I'm working on a newer project and some feedback on this would be nice. Thanks
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Post by ayanabashu on Aug 21, 2005 13:56:52 GMT -5
A new chapter has been posted for "A Cry In The Dark".
I know some of you are reading it, could you let me know what you think of it?
Thanks
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Aug 22, 2005 8:59:33 GMT -5
I know people are reading the first part to my story. Can I have some feedback please?
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Post by Jauhzmynn Enz on Aug 22, 2005 17:28:40 GMT -5
I don't know about the rest, but I've enjoyed all the stories. I just try to not stick comments in the story threads cuz it might disrupt it. UNLESS the author doesn't mind.
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Post by Leda EmBorr on Aug 24, 2005 3:01:50 GMT -5
I know people are reading the first part to my story. Can I have some feedback please? Your story moves along quite well, carried by the non-stop action!  It leaves me wanting to read the next part! The Sith are tracking her! A Cry in the Dark---My fav characters, Qui-Gon and Obi! Love the way you end your excerpts with a "teaser"... kind of a "cliffhanger"! |
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Post by himiko sabbrawrra on Aug 25, 2005 2:09:38 GMT -5
Leda Em-Borr
Thanks. I should have the net part up soon. I have 8 chapters already but they arn't fixed for grammer or anything.I am still working on it, as well as it is getting looked over.
And I dont mind people posting comments in the story thread anyway
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It leaves me wanting to read the next part! The Sith are tracking her!