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Post by Ani-Chay Pinn on Jun 21, 2005 17:42:59 GMT -5
i like the "there is no emotion there is peace" line ... That's actually the line that I have the most trouble with. "There is no emotion..." sounds a bit too much like suppressing emotions, which overall is a bad thing. Control, of course, would be essential for a Jedi using the Force, but suppression just leads to having them pop up later in unpleasant and unpredictable ways. Unfortunately, "There is no emotion, there is control," sounds even more heavy-handed. I'd try "There is no fury, there is peace." Or, "There is no wrath, there is peace.".  I saw that 4-line Code in "I, Jedi", but I don't know if that's the first place where it's been used in the EU.
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