Post by Ani-Chay Pinn on May 30, 2005 8:07:38 GMT -5
Isn't the second version from the "I, Jedi" book? It looks familiar. I've never seen the first one before.
The first one could be written without most of the pronouns.
As a Jedi I am Sworn to Valor...
Heart Knows Only Virtue;
Blade Defends the Helpless;
Might Upholds the Weak;
Word Speaks Only the Truth;
Wratth Undoes the Wicked;
As Knights of The old Code This We Swear To Uphold The Will of The Force. Long Live The Jedi.
Yes, I think "roth" should be "wrath" except that wrath in general doesn't sound right for a Jedi, even if it's aimed at the wicked. Unless there was some intent to invent a word where roth is meant as the light side of the Force kind of wrath?