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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Oct 17, 2002 19:02:23 GMT -5
If you have any comments, critique, suggestions, reviews, or flames for any fanfic, post them here....don't want to clog up the story. ;D Edit: Changed the title. Now it's comments for all the writers!
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Oct 18, 2002 5:40:31 GMT -5
Now YOU are a writer! GREAT beginning....love the character descriptions and development...(makes note to self)... Boy....I can see that when you compare our two "stories"... as always....I learn much from you Padawan.....this should be fun!
Anyhew....I think I will ask to share this thread for people to post suggestions for "A Knight's Journey" too....
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Post by Eqin Ilis on Oct 18, 2002 9:54:45 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,0000]Cool story, Ryss! I'm with Schph, you're good.
Um... could I share the thread too? I'd feel wierd if I had my own thread for comments and such...[/glow]
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Post by Jade1 on Oct 18, 2002 10:41:23 GMT -5
[glow=purple,2,300]Amazing!! What a great concept you and Schp have Ryss. I really like it it is really cool. I am continues to be amazed ant what a great group of people we have I feel so honored to be a part of this assembly. I really cant wait to meet everyone. I love the stories. If I get and idea I'm going to start one you guys are really great at the writing and I love the knight, padawan thing you have going on to.[/glow]
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Post by Jade1 on Oct 18, 2002 10:54:11 GMT -5
[glow=purple,2,300]I can't leave Eqin out. I just read youre to and I really loved it awsome Job and very creative I'm anxious to see how it develops. You are doing a great job!!!![/glow]
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Schph Gochi
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Post by Schph Gochi on Oct 18, 2002 18:27:20 GMT -5
Eqin... nice twist!
I will certainly enjoy reading all these stories....
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Post by Jade1 on Oct 19, 2002 15:40:01 GMT -5
Ryss Just four words I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT!! Well maybe five. Maybe I'll write a story I wrote a character descreption that was rather long for Socean. I'm not a writer but if you want feel free to Cirtique.
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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Oct 19, 2002 16:36:39 GMT -5
*Blushes at all the compliments*
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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Oct 21, 2002 22:43:21 GMT -5
Schph...I love how your story is coming along....you're a great writer, even though you didn't know it. ;D ;D
And Eqin, when are you going to add on to yours? I like the direction it's headed! ;D
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Post by Schph Gochi on Oct 22, 2002 11:20:15 GMT -5
thanks Ryss....but actually....I am really a hack!
My style is rather crude.....
but it is fun to try!
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Post by Eqin Ilis on Oct 22, 2002 12:00:25 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,0000]::blushes:: Thanks everyone.
PS Ryss, I added to it. ;D[/glow]
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Post by Eqin Ilis on Oct 24, 2002 12:50:15 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,0000]Hey, Schph! It's really good. Can't wait to read the next part. *hint, hint* ;D[/glow]
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Post by Schph Gochi on Oct 24, 2002 16:20:35 GMT -5
I'm takin' it slow...got a lot going on the next couple days...so not much time to think and write....
btw...Eqin.....I am kinda holding back on the "Jedi Requested" till I get a clue where the Jedi on Nar Shadda are going... I will get my butt out of the Library and meet Nyst hopefully in a post tomorrow...and your package went out again...
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Post by Eqin Ilis on Oct 24, 2002 16:58:54 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,0000]Ok. Thanks.[/glow]
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Post by Ryss Fal-Orran on Oct 28, 2002 19:18:28 GMT -5
Yay, Jade started a story too! *grin* Nice start! ;D
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